All Comments on 'Two for One'

I found no offending (AND NUMEROUS) grammatical errors, no huge numbers of misspellings or typos, but it just din't grab me. Doesn't seem like you're a BAD writer, this story just wasn't a winner for me.

Could be a brussels sprouts thing....some like, some don't.

I'm not giving a grossly low rating, since you obviously put effort into it.

you don't create anything you just describe sex