All Comments on 'Two Weeks of Leave Ch. 02'
by jkdeke
- 22 Comments
digdaddyrichover 14 years agoHe needs to make sure he leaves Shea and Laura feeling the lust for him, and a gnawing need to have him in their pussies, then just take Priya with him back to where she lives and make her his personal sex partner................. This story is over the top when it comes to erotic relationships. The only thing it needs is for some long time plans being made for all of them to have a way to be with each other all of the time. Thanks .......Rich
Anonymousover 14 years agoDon't stop now. Even if you were to get step mom and Jay married nothing could spoil their fun.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoThis story needs to continue its escalation. I am SURE a Marine has a few buddies who'd love to join in on this sister/step-mom combination.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoGreat story but you need to continue left us wanting more, much more.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoWhy did you stop? Amongst the best I've read on this board
LogicallyInsanealmost 13 years agoPlease give us a proper ending. This story is way too good to not have an ending.. :)
Dream59over 12 years agoI have to keep going. The story and charactors demand it.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThis is my first time commenting on any story I have read, so, suffice it to say that I'm glad I found this one. I hope you are in the process of finishing chapter 3. Can't wait til you get the third female in the family. Awesome, really good. Keep it up. And Thanks.
Turtle1952almost 7 years agoLoved it, all of it. PLEASE keep writing this story. Not very nice to leave us hanging like this.
dirtywhiteboy67over 4 years agoStarted out good and keeps getting better. I love it. Now on to the next chapter please.
shadowolf1almost 3 years agonow that is what i call a family....i had been home a few times on leave....would had loved this to happen...even if it was just with my mother...my sisters would have been a bonus
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