All Comments on 'Undercover Cop'

Captivating story!

I have to say a fantastic story. Loved it and would love to see what happens with the next guy.

Far fetched, but very enjoyable, can’t wait to read about Marie’s next adventure. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Dr beulahthemick; Excellent story, well told even if it was a tad long, quite upset Afrim was topped, but shit happens. Would love a pt2.

Good story. I liked your leads. I’d like to read more.

Great story, look forward to more.

One of the hottest pieces I've read on this platform so far. How I wish I can give 100stars

Good story. I know how exciting it is to offer a business associate a blot job. I had a girl like Maria working for me and I would sometimes call her into the conference room and ask a client if he wanted to play with her tits. She loved it and the client never questioned a bill. She begged me to let her suck their cocks and we eventually did that too. I never met a girl as fucking horny as Lisa and so willing to suck and fuck anyone, so I am sure their is some truth to parts of this story.

Started off so well. Nicely setup with the other undercover hookers and the cuck husband. Then it goes into Afrim as the target. Sorry but to me it got very boring when he entered the story. The dialogue during the sex or the teasing scenes was extremely generic. Shes working as vice hooker at the start which is the whole story for the first part, but the dialogue between characters about the situation is barely anything. Thats for the whole opening 5 or 6 pages at least. Its well written for the other parts and structurally, even though there a few too many convenient happenings to get certain plot points across. Overall nice writing as a story. The sex scenes and teasing was quite poor. Felt more like a women's erotic novel bought at Walmart. You've got the writing and structure solid, even though the eventual plot was not to my liking. The erotic play and dialogue needs huge improvements.

superb.