All Comments on 'Unthinkable Night'

Hot description of a long, intense fuck session. 5 star fun.

This was just another example of excess and shows why chronic masterbaters should not write stories they are clueless in real life about. Pathetic, inconceivable and delusional.

Chapter 2? Could be a interesting

I hope you do a follow up story.

loved it...could have done without the limerics tho

Very hot and very well written, You really need to write a sequel. Ignore ignorant comments made by people not even brave enough to sign them/

Not great, not too bad. But interesting that the first "Anonymous" is critical of someone else's work if he can't even spell "masturbaters".

Bad start. Forward should be Foreword.

That's where I stopped.

Congratulations. I like all, the personages, the teasing, the techniques. Great 5

Great pace and timing. One of the most erotic stories I’ve read on this site. Hope you continue this story. Look forward to more of your works. - Vriesea

Clunky dialogue, very very unrealistic, felt like it was written by AI. Explained everything to the point where my imagination had no room to grow. Transitions in to plot points seemed forced and unrealistic / unnatural.

I got very bored reading this.

Liked it, chronology was a little clunky and the sex was convoluted in places, but it was hot!

But this guy:

“Bad start. Forward should be Foreword. That's where I stopped”

You read one word and then took the time to comment negatively. What a fucking dick!

The whole husbands/Thailand element was superfluous and a waste of space.

It’s stories like this that make me glad I’m able to speed read.

Very well written and played out. The limericks were a bit overplayed but overall, kudos.

I would love to read this story, but knowing authors are ignorant about tags, i fear there is sharing, swapping, ntr bullsh*t...

I actually enjoyed this. Looking forward to how the rest of the story develops in the following chapters :D

And don't mind the negative comments, Author. Keep up the good work 👍

when's part 2 coming out ???

really nice really good their fuckmeat was so good deeep inside beautiful mommy fuck fruit whose eggs needed fertilizing so much and the boys fucked their mommies so good and made them cum so much that they both were fucked and fertilized by there sons or neighbor sons sperm

Please continue with a part 2

Loved and would like to see chapter 2 and beyond.

new author ,first effort . waiting for part 2 !!

This is one of the stories you can NOT load into a text reader and NOT have to edit the hell out of it. Because I listen to stories using Text Aloud and this story would take me at least an hour to edit out all the dot dot dot dot dots, and all the dot dot dot dots, and the you have double the amounts of dot dot dots. I'll quit and score 1 star. But typical of a member telling himself, "Self, you can write just as good as these assholes at Literotica." So you did and it's typical of someone flunking out of English Literature in high school.

Well, this one ought to satisfy all of you with the weird pregnancy fetish . . . .