All Comments on 'Vacation with SIL and Her Hubby'

Off to a good start. I can definitely see this story turning into something really good.

Your writing is excellent and I have enjoyed the three stories you have submitted so far. More, please! I am following you.

Good start to your story. Please continue.

Bored after about 3 paragraphs.

Love Tim’s thought bubble so true comments, still chuckling

Just the thought of my sister in-law sucking me off in the back seat has me throbbing.

I like it and you go my attention. Don’t rush jajaja 5/5

Thanks @cageysea9725, I appreciate all comments, good and not so good. I thought the same as I re-read it, but was torn between getting right to the facts versus developing the characters and the storyline. I find it hard to strike that careful balance!

This is something hot and could be change into swap story.

Back seat SIL blow job is very erotic concept. Good job. I'd like to see him return the favor the next night after some hot sexy dancing. Wife calls shotgun again puts her head in BIL'S lap, sucking his dick while he's driving and husband is fingering her sister to a screaming orgasm and now everything is out in the open and it's a swap. Just a thought. Reading comments below, I thought character development was essential in this story. Sometimes when stories get to be 4 or 5 pages long, and you end it with a 5 minute BJ, its a bit much. I thought yours was perfectly balanced.

5 stars. I will give your other stories a look

Very hot! Please continue.