All Comments on 'Vanessa and Veronica Ch. 05'

I do not know who this new vampire is but i think he is screwing with the wrong family and if the girls don't kick his ass then Ethan or worse yet Katrina will. Very intriguing chapter can not wait for the next

Donald is right. This unknown vampire must not know who he is dealing with. He has certainly chosen the wrong family to cross.

This guy probably has a death wish

He must be crazy if he thinks he's gonna get very far. He has chosen the wrong family !!

Excellent chapter as usual.love love this.

Hmmmm???????

Dying to know who this trouble-making vampire is. His days are numbered-- Etan and his family don't play... Look forward to reading more !!

of course there had to be a twist here lol, I think I know who the vampire is and boy if i'm right what a twist this will be. cant wait to find out if im right.

It's Katrinas doctor from Ethan that wanted her. I just know it. Good update kal. Love the interigation.

... and write about vampires in such a manner that the reader sees absolutely nothing irregular! I mean, we are talking vampires! Yet because of your writing skill that fact becomes just another background item. Unbelievable!

Add to that, your wonderful story "I will Love you Forever" is one of the 3 best stories I have read online anywhere and it has nothing at all to do with the rest of your stories! Yes, I know, they all are in the category of "Interracial love" but I disagree with the categorization of all but "I will Love you Forever" as "Interracial love"

Great work!

JR

Who's the evil vampire plotting revenge against Ethan and Katrina? This is so good,Kal!!!218B

It can't be Mason he found his mate already but who could it be... can't wait to find

out

Well now here we go just when we get the guys past Ethan's anger now we have a crazy vampire who's wanting revenge incredible I just knew things was going a little too smoothly now their mates are really gonna have to show they can protect the girls and when Ethan finds out woo wee look out there is gonna be heck to pay when he catches up with that crazy vampire he's gonna pray for death by the time Ethan gets done with him looking forward to see what happen next please update again real soon thanks!!

It can be a vampire who is affected by prevention of rapes by Sinclaire family.

That the vampire in the end of the story is related to the mate that Ethan's brother accidentally killed during a rape attempt...

Just knew things wouldn't end that smoothly though. I wonder if the Melissa character had been with this vampire and he's angry because she's gone now...? I have to say that there is no way in hell that "the talk" Ethan had with girl's mates would have taken place without me and my input. What? The parents stand as one except for when it comes to their most important responsibility - their girls? I guess, to some degree it is because I was a single mother to my daughter and I was the one who demanded that my daughter's suitors show her respect and protect her under threat of certain ass-whippings and death - LITERALLY - that I find this traditional "father-lays-down-the-rules-and-he-alone" scenario pissing me off. Those boys would know they will have two parents to contend with if they fuck up, not one. It is this misguided "it's a man's world" mentality that allowed the Sinclaire males to rape women with little to no guilt and with impunity, which keeps real-life incidents of rape high (against females and males), and which hinders these rapes from being handled in the justice systems throughout the world in the way they should be handled.

PLEASE HURRY UP AND PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER OUT. IM SO LOVIN THIS STORY. IM NEW ON HERE AND I HAVE LIKE 15 PEOPLE READING THIS STORY.

Can you please just work on 1 story at a time.cause right now you are all over the place. Your stories are great just want to be able to enjoy one story that's finished.

There are several stories that are completed.

Life goes on. I almost enjoy the comments as much as the story.