All Comments on 'Voyeur gets Voyeured Ch. 04'

At least as good maybe a trace better. Pool Boy is a high bar though! I really like your female characters. They are all so lusty!! Hope Bev and Eva don't wait too long to make another appearance.

I liked pool boy but this is a little better balanced

I read the first chapter and really liked it. I even commented that I was looking forward to where the story would go next. Then be it the problems that arose after they updated the site or whatever I didn't see anymore updates to the story. It wasn't until a couple of days ago that I found you had indeed continued your tale. Having made through to this part I'm still excited to see where things go between Jack and Pryia and where things between him and Donna may go. And of course there's Divi and her friends.

Agree with others, I like these characters better tan Pool Boy; though, Pool Boy was good.

to me, I prefer "pool boy" because I liked the character of Alexis and all that went on but I do like this