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Great Train Robbery (1963) - Wikipedia

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The Great Train Robbery was the robbery of £2.6 million from a Royal Mail train heading from Glasgow to London in the early hours of Thursday, 8 August 1963, at Bridego Railway Bridge, Ledburn, near Mentmore in Buckinghamshire, England.

‎Bruce Reynolds · ‎Ronnie Biggs · ‎Buster Edwards · ‎Charlie Wilson

Buster Edwards is actually Ronnie 'Buster' Edwards. Curious that two Great Train robbers appear in your story.

Kill off Georgie and Rayanne? They went through so much shit to be together. They deserved a better ending, sir.

You dimmed my sparkly day.

Overall good story - but what was achieved by killing Rayanne (using the same trite device, wasp in a Dr Pepper can, used by the same author in a different story) and Georgie ? Tempted to mark 0*, didn't grade yet.

Sad that both Georgie & Rayanne died here. I liked both characters, and had hoped that their cameos would continue - but your theme of 'bad things happen sometimes' carries on.

Seriously, I enjoy your work, and the way you write about life. Thank you for sharing your talents.

@ 'interior' race.

Great story. Ronald Biggs made me fucking hostile😈