All Comments on 'Walt's Gift Ch. 02'

Thanks for chapter two , can I be cheeky and look forward to more.

This is a very nice follow on to the initial story. It is interesting as yours usually are. The sex is a little blander than usual, but fits the story well. I liked the humor, especially the contest, the rest seemed a bit on the wry side.

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I voted a "4", I hope you continue the Walt/Nick story.

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and (to borrow a phrase from Dickens),"please sir,can we have some more".

Great writing SCORPIO! Having reread Part 1, I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed Part 2 and your concept of love as lived by the characters in this excellent tale. The plot is implausible but, who gives a fuck, it succeeded very well for me! Pete.

Absolutely Fantabulous!! Excellent way to end this tale. Bravo!!

Thank you for another chapter.

I'd like to find that apartment house to see if they need a maintenance man.

The son got it. And the father was able to pass it on so that it would continue. Yes this is a simple and simplex answer to help between people. Yes we are all sexual

beings but that isn't what causes the problems with people. The anger, tempers, not looking into the other's eyes or out for the other person at the same time. Sex is part of the sharing, and expressing feelings to each not just pumping or whatever.

God Bless inga's sons when they go looks for a wife. Thank you for the story GP

I'm a late bloomer (a 73yo gent) who just found this author. I hope it's not a sign that postings time out and are retired from this site. I'm proud to be able to read Part 2, but I can't find Part 1! HELP. I do enjoy mysteries, so I'll keep searching ... Thanks for the remaining offerings. Tony C

A bit over the top, 4/5 because of that