All Comments on 'Wanda Pt. 02'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 5 years ago

Love the hot sex though I don't see this ending as a mom/daughter/boyfriend threeway.

Storyteller0112Storyteller0112over 5 years ago
Hooked

Ok, so you’ve set the hook in my lip. How is this all going to play out? Waiting, impatiently.

Sidney43Sidney43over 5 years ago

Don't know where you are going to take this, but a nicely written story. The whole scene where Kathy's mother is hiding in the shower is hilarious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yes, there should be another chapter (or more)

I want to know more about Kathy’s father/Wanda’s husband: why isn’t Wanda getting what she needs from him exactly? Given the themes in your other (super hot) stories maybe it’s time to introduce Wanda’s husband more properly? Maybe he too has needs that can’t be met by Wanda...? (Not sure what direction you want to take it but I can see a possible Chp 3 that’s more GM than “Mature”.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More Chapters

Liked the whole series. Are you going to do another chapter or two? The ending left the story hanging in the air.

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