by TheDarkCloud
waited along time for this and what a treat it was its well written and a fresh theme keep it up i loved it i know your busy but try not leave it so long till the next part i dont know where your going with it but its looking good
surprised how short this chapter was with the first one being so wonderful lengthy and full of different stuff...but tis ok...enjoyed it anyways and hope to see a knight in shining armour at some point eh? keep up the good work and hope to read more soon. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
four months man come on play fair lets have some more of this story its too good to stop now
After setting up such a devine scenerio it seemed that your heroine submitted with less reluctance, revulsion and humiliation than was expected. You seemed to hurry through her moral decline too quickly. I would have expected much more resistance and outrage to being so overpowered and demeaned. Frankly, in such a wonderfully esablished situation I expected a more detailed demise to her haughty character. Generally I adore your writing and look forward to more. Continue on, Maestro!!!
I've just spent the last week reading and enjoying your stories. I love huniliation type stories.
Humiliation of women is one thing, but the actions of the Japanese invasion forces were not the actions of a civilised society.