All Comments on 'Wendy Found Herself'

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shyintx almost 11 years ago

Sorry totally unrealistic

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

I agree with another comment---totally unrealistic. No loving wife planning on a family

would get fucked (actually raped) turn submissive on a dime and then run off with him.

Really bad, just crap

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

You expect realistic?

That's kind of a strange comment; considering this category is supposed to be FANTASY.

How about some more constructive feedback. The first paragraph was awkward. Being punch between the "eye balls". "I was sat on my ass." The story didn't feel like it was very well developed. The grammar was difficult to work through. However, I think that it definitely had potential.

It's not a piece of crap; just underdeveloped. Consider editing.

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Because it's a fantasy doesn't mean it shouldn't be true to life.

This is totally unbelievable.

If it's not true to life it deserves 1*

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

Ismét egy értéktelen sz@r írás...

Hogyan lehet ilyen szemét ,semmi értékes mondanivaló nélküli munkát leírni ,ami nulla az én szemembe!!!

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