All Comments on 'What Bill and Kate Want... Ch. 02'

good story, compelling characters. keep writing and ignore people who criticize just to criticize.

they need to marry merri in some form. its sad that she doesn't feel like she is totally accepted into a bond/relationship/marriage/couple/whatever. lol. seriously, she needs to feel more secure and they need to full on recognize her in some way that seals the deal. I did love the story very much. glad kate has come to realize that merri means more to her sexuality than just getting a fun kink every once in awhile with her husband.

They really should not be parents. And they probably shouldn't be married to one another. Ugh!

thinking od what was happening and of course watching dear annony sucking a bbc!!

Such a sweet couple! I don't know if you'll add more to this story, I hope you do. I want to know if Merri gets a sister, Oh that would be nice! Or if Liam grows up and finds out about the relationship if he'll want the same. Such a good read, thank you for writing!

Good luck raising the kid and keeping him a normal human and not a POS like his parents.

Shame you haven't taken it further.

Don't let the critics get to you. It is easy to criticize that's why everyone does it!

If you don't like where a story is going don't continue reading it. This and was a very positive story the people involved all though some of us may not agree with the idea of manage a trois or dominance and such. Whatever floats your boat comes to mind as long as everyone is in agreement. Anyway I think it was a nice story and everyone seems happy and committed to the relationship.

I caught the teaser about Merri's desires, and the female characters seem to be evolving toward... something

The authors note made me laugh. Well said. I'm glad you decided to address the various conflicts of interests between the three participants. You show that it is possible to live in a power exchange relationship, without being victimized. I approve of how Kate saw through stacia's behavior. I also approve of Bill reigning in his own desires to avoid compromising Merri's professional standing at the clinic. It would have been quite hot to have scenes at the clinic, but I believe you made the better choice when you addressed the real world consequences that could arise if Bill and Merri were not professional at work.

Not really sure this is a Loving Wife story. Merri seems lost in this story. The baby makes it hard to see a reasonable future for any of them....

Apparently you agree.

does very little to continue the ideas of the 3 of them. spanking was fairly lame, not erotic. should either woman in for an "exam" in stirrups for both their teasing use

I really thought that the story would turn into a real polyamorous relationship with Bill breeding both Merri and Kate, with both of them having his children. Was kind of disappointed that it didn't.

I love loving doms, thank you for telling a story where this is the case.

I'm glad that you brought Kate and Bill back together at the end. The Stacia plot was the right move, even if it was executed too quickly.

loved the whole series! hit all the right spots. kept me dripping the whole time. thanks!