All Comments on '"What Does She See in Him?" Ch. 03'

Amazing series! Hope there's another chapter

Another absolutely amazing chapter! I like how you cleared up Andy's feelings about Laura telling Zoe (that he didn't feel so much betrayed by it as he felt fine about it and even admitted to himself he might've missed her telling him just how close she and Zoe were) rather than leaving it unclear.

What I personally hope for now is that if Zoe is going to 'get in on the action', as it seems like she will, I hope it won't be just Zoe and Andy 1 on 1, but rather a threeway with Laura - even if Laura just sits back in the corner of the room and watches for round 1 or something. Not only because I think it would be hotter that way, but because it feels best for the future of Laura and Andy's relationship. It wouldn't feel right for Laura to be so nonchalant about leaving the two of them alone together if she's really a caring girlfriend. Also, I really wouldn't want ANY kind of opening for her to go around and having sex with others (whether behind his back or not) and especially not any other guys.

If handled right though (I'm confident it will be) future chapters could be really really hot. And that's saying something considering how hot it's gotten already. Maybe even Octavia could get in on the action if the stars are made to align :)

This series gets better and better. I'm definitely jealous of Andy.

I'm hoping Andy soon gets in on the action. It's a bit one sided so far.

I'll be looking forward to finding out what she does see in him..

WOnderful. Another great chapter.

I can't wait for the next part. I really hope to see Zoe get in on it, which it seems to be heading that direction. I have to agree with Ladd though, it should not just be a 1 on 1 thing. It should be Andy, Laura and Zoe all together. Anyway, I am really looking forward to more. Keep this series going, as long as you can.

If Whiskey & Ladd are giving you high praise, you're doing things right! Well done.

I'm glad you've updated this sexy charmer as it certainly makes for stimulating reading; the chemistry/affection between Laura and Andy is hot, too.

And finally our man gets his dick wet! Hopefully Andy will get a chance to top Laura in the future, and a possible 3way with Zoe.

loving the relationship u have built between the two

Can't wait for more!

Great stories. Please keep the series going!

more more

It can't stop here I need more

Another great chapter. Can't wait for him to get double teamed by Laura and Zoe. Want him completely covered in fun.

WoW, great storyline... Is there more....?

This is such a good series and I’d love to see much more of it, the characters are amazing and I think it has a lot of potential

There is so much you can do with this cast of characters - please give us more! Give Zoe a chance, parry with all 3, maybe let Andy pitch to Laura?!? So much left, and thanks for these!

Plz continue. Let Zoe have a go. Have them have a 3way, have him spit roasted by their cocks and have them dp his ass.

This series was sweet! Hope you can bring it back and extend it!

Write chapter 4...what happens with the red haired girl??? Please don't let me have ginger

I have read your story many times.

Lovely story but doesn't he need feminising and impregnating ?

This is an amazing series! And so many more story lines to explore... Please come back and add to it!

Please use Zoe. Laura could let Andy and Zoe be together, then join them after a time and both use Andy. A little roughly, split roast, both trying to go in Andy ass, covering him in cum. Maybe after that Zoe gets more aggressive and gets Willis in bed turns him into a sissy. And Laura and Andy get to watch. LMAO

The element of love and emotional connection is what i like best in this story.

But shouldn’tL aura let him fuck her?

You have a humorous and zexy tyle of writing. Please continue the series. Don't let hacnging.

Wow... what I Great story. I really loved the characters and would live to read what happens next. I know it's be a while since this was updated.... but PLEASE come back and add top this Amazing work. Thank you!!!!!

I read chapter one and said I wanted to read more before I knew there was 2 more chapters.

Truly entertaining story of course still want more.

Excellent work

A 3-some with Zoe would be so HOT !

Definitely need the next part ASAP!

Too bad this writer quit before he got to the three-some with Zoe. That would have been pretty hot.

Great Story. I agree with others comments you should continue the story.

What happened to Zoe?

Excellent writing and a sweet couple. I agree with the others, this is crying out for a part 4 and more. Threesome with Zoe NEEDS to happen.

WOW !!!!!!!

Please. Please, please write more chapters. Its very addicting read. I so need. Everyone needs some form of a Laura in their life.

There has to be another one Zoe and his girl has to get it on with him

This is quite sweet

Yes PART 4 what happens with Zoe?

I hate that you get into a great story then the writer gives up

No no no. Rework the story. Good start. Correct errors. Me my. Zoe sucking him as he is getting fucked is the only way that bit of writing would work. And sand is going to get in his ass rubbing him raw. Try again.

ch 4 ? please

ch 4 ? please

It's very good. Please finish.

4 please

Modern romance

Great story up to the point when she was doin something humanly impossible. I think.

WHAT DOES SHE SEE IN HIM?" CH. 03 when will CH 04 and ending coming

Some rather improbable contortions at the finish.

Need to have more of this story though, and in particular get Zoe involved.

Wow! And what of Zoe? She was introduced and then.........? Nothing like a shy ginger to.......

I hope he fucks zoe.. and gets a more equitable relationship going, seeing all these trans/futa stories of straight guys turned into glorified buttsluts is off putting.. totally overlooking the fact that a straight guys sexual energy is focused through his dick.. but somehow that sexual energy is totally shifted to his ass.. its actually annoying how nearly every time, the male character has to conform to something submissive, can we have a story where he fucks her too? and she makes the same consideration for sharing her own ass with him? why must every male in these stories become an onahole with special effects?!

Total and utter disappointment! Part 3 is good, leaving you wanting more, but this is the last part and the story was abandoned without any form of closure or ending with lots of remaining questions. It’s been about 8 years since part 3 was posted and is the last story the writer posted…so I’m not expecting the story to ever be finished. So sad, it had such promise and premise.

Re: the other comments.

Much of this story seems familiar and I am convinced that I have read the missing fourth part which featured Zoe.