All Comments on 'What It Takes Ch. 03'

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Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Incredible Story

Even without anal (one of your mainstays) this had me hot as hell, & bouncing on my bad dragon dildo, while I jerked my dick. I would rate it a 6 if I could, as it was just that hot. You could just feel Lunas lust. It was...palpable.

ender2k2k about 7 years ago

This story gets better with each chapter

I look forward to the final chapter. Hope to see it soon. Thanks

Jevandtieriel almost 7 years ago

I'm still here reading

I don't know why but this chapter wasn't as engaging as the other ones. But I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

Best

This is the best chapter. Less sex but the relationship seems genuine. Will love to read the next chapter

Benzguy280 over 5 years ago

Better

Outstanding it’s only getting better totally enjoying the story and how you are developing it. Just hot!!!

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story flow so far. It's amazing really, I'm kinda grossed out but I keep reading hahaha

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