All Comments on 'What Mom Knows Fucks Her Slut Niece'

Boo to pegging. Rest is good, but let’s call a spade a spade and agree they will take several years to come if at all. This is what, the tenth chapter in seven years. Could you please try finishing one story before moving on to the next?

As always an excellent story from my favorite writer. Can't wait for the next one, plz don't keep us waiting.

What Mom Knows is Sodomizing Ellie

should definitely be the next story. Not a big fan of pegging. Save that for your other gay sex series.

Really? That hardly fits anywhere in this story line. That’s more an alternate universe. Save that for some other story

Hi

Alright no pegging.

I was sending a feeler out and the answer seems pretty clear.

As for how long it takes... the series is challenging to write and i need the right idea befote i can write it.

But the next part will be Ellie's ass

And hopefully in less timr.

Jasmine

Worth the wait. More please

love this series, but if ever one of your stories was crying out to be illustrated, this it it.

I agree with everyone no pegging! Otherwise keep up with this series please. I want to see Ellie completely submit to him and become his newest slave, and I wasn't to see him add his other aunts to his harem.

The best episode in the series so far.

I assume you will continue this story? I would like to see the truth or dare story next.

Just a couple of thoughts. First, I agree that pegging really doesn't fit this particular story line, BUT you are the author. We can decide to read it or not! Just so folks know, pegging has very little if anything to do with being gay.

And second, I am happy with how you wrote this chapter, although I really wish that Laura had put up a little more of a fight. Just didn't seem like her turning was a dramatic as it could have been. Still a 5 Star series and story

Ed

I agree with the others no pegging but illustrations would be a BIG boost. Story line reminds me of my own experiences.

This is my favorite series that you've written. I would love to finally have you get around to Ellie and have her get put in the place she puts others as a submissive. As far as pegging goes that doesn't seem like something a true dominate would be into as it would be a surrender and a dominant person wouldn't be comfortable with that. Thanks again hope you continue, great series.

Perhaps pool all their ressources, buy a big house, have Curtis reign supreme over all his eager sluts, including the final submission of ellie, then just let the story expand from there, with the rest of the female family members, lauras pets / girlfriends, and whatever hot woman they can reel in for curtis, and I agree pegging/buttplay is probably not something you would be into if you are to be the Master of them all. Anyways fantastic story sofar 5 stars again from here.

Love this series. Hopefully another chapter soon, just please no pegging.

First,

Thank you very much for tossing out ideas, and being open to feedback. Above and beyond your already great writing and imagination.

I agree with others that pegging does not seem to fit overall in this story line. The other side is you have written alternate ending stories before. If it is something you have in mind go for it and have fun!!

I would enjoy the Utter Submission myself, kind of curious where you were heading there since most seem submissive as of right now. Unless you are thinking to include breeding as part of the process.

Awesome stuff as always!!

Amazing story so far, just please no pegging! It doesn't fit this story!

Thank you for your work!

I have loved this series as I do many of your works. teachers pet being my all time fav. but any one of the last four ideas sound perfect! the pegging ones don't fit and i found that in reading your last few stories you are going through a dom faze.

Loved this series but it's taking too long and please update fast

Ellie's ass

Truth n dare

Sondomising ellie

Love your series this one is easily one of my favorites out of the whole site. I'm curious how you're going to do pegging if your going to do a power exchange or if he'll still be in control even bottoming. Can't wait to read it.

Wooahh i've been waiting for this update tnx...

This story was truly worth the wait, as you said in the story lol.

Its time for Ellie to finally give her ass to Curtis. Hope you stay away from Curtis getting pegged it ruin the structure of this series. I think it be good to sneak Curtis ex back into it as well Have Miranda and Curtis just totally dominate her. Maybe Curtis could run into Marks bride fuck her like the dirty slut she is.

Jasmine,

The reluctant and embarrassing assignments you give your characters is the very best part of your stories, and although the seduction theme between mother and her sweetheart daughter often involves an outside person coming in and changing everything, this is my favorite way I like to see it happen. I never get bored with the theme, it is my best fantasy always. Thank you.

What Mom Knows is Sodomizing Ellie please! Great work 😄👏🏻

Jas, I simply loved how you didn't just "break the fourth wall", you fucking smashed it to the ground with a "Mother-fucking" (pun intended) wrecking ball; and you did it beautifully too. This chapter has definitely been a long time in "cumming" (pun intended, again), so I'm ecstatic that it is FINALLY here. But it was well worth the wait, and I am thoroughly looking forward to the next installment in this amazingly wonderful series. And on that note, I feel, as do many of your other rabid readers, that the next chapter should be Curtis FINALLY nailing Ellie's sweet, succulent MILF ass; but it should be in a way that Ellie acquiesces so as to be on equal footing with Alexis and the others, that way Ellie and Alexis can properly begin their marriage as equals- both being 3 hole fuck slut slaves to Curtis while also being Master/slave to each other. And speaking of the Master/slave hierarchy of the story: obviously Curtis is the top Master of the family with Alexis (his mother) being the Top Slut, followed by Miranda (Curtis' wife and Alexis' #1 pet), then Ellie (who is also Alexis Mistress), Nana, Aunt Elizabeth, and finally at the bottom, cousin Laura; at least that is how I feel that the hierarchy, exclusively within the family, goes. I, and many of your rabid readers, all feel that it would be best to leave the pegging out of this series altogether; it just doesn't fit with the flow of the story.

Hey it's a great series and I hope you continue to write it.Also I think it would be very good in if you stay away from peggin and make curtis impregnate ellie ın total submission as a present for his mother and maybe Miranda and couple of relatives as well towards the ending of the series

My Choice

By how you have this story it makes no sense for Alexis to peg Curtis or have become completely submissive plus it’s about time Ellie gets knocked down a peg or two,cause I have a love hate thing with Ellie I like her character but I’m not a fan of girls with that type of attitude the bitchy snobby stuck up and I’m better than anyone type of personality.What I really wanna see is Alexis dominate Ellie cause Curtis has black mail now with knowing Ellie is cheating on Alexis with that other teacher combine that with the fact Curtis dad cheated on Alexis that’s a good way for Curtis to take Ellie ass knowing plus Alexis becoming the dom between her and Ellie but not sure if that would work with your story or not.

Another great story, but pegging, utter submission, and orgies will only ruin the series

I think it's time for Curtis to finally dominate Elle and have her serve as the newest submissive. And by now Alexis' divorce should be time for another wedding too.

I wish I started reading this when it came out such an awesome story. I do think if there is going to be pegging Miranda should be the one pegging Curtis maybe have Alexis help but for some reason I see Miranda pegging him more than Alexis. I would love for Ellie to finally be broken but I kind of want her seduction to be slow almost like Catching Mommy was granted I always like new but for Ellie to be drooling or even scared that she might like it would be hot.

Love this series...

Pegging?!....Can't wait for the next installment!

The surprise gift should definitely be Ellie's ass. While I do enjoy a good pegging story, especially from you, it just doesn't fit the characters here. You have spent 9 chapters establishing Curtis as the alpha male all the women must obey, him suddenly being in the submissive role would throw off that hierarchy. However, Ellie finally submitting to him is a natural progression of those roles.

Trying to seduce his dad's sisters has some merit for the future, but i think it should be his mom, not him. Sending pictures of his sisters submitting to his ex-wife would be a good, if improbable, form of revenge.

Nuff said

Please Continue, Really Love This Series!!

Ellie's ass, while I'd love a pegging story, you've already established Curtis as a dom who wouldn't want to get pegged if he would want to get pegged why go through all the power struggle with Ellie? Besides it wouldn't make for a nice story (concerning this series).....

Wonderful story please continue with these lovely sluts

The hierarchy is already quite confusing and inconsistancy shows in the writing. All too often supposedly submissive characters speak out of turn or above their station to their superiors. It has even been admitted by the writer, via Curtis, that he has done little to actually build his harem. All of his conquests have been a result of someone else arranging it and yet, everyone submits to him why? Because he has a big dick? That is all he has brought to the table through this entire series, yet all the women just surrender to him.

Curtis has been at this long enough, imo, and I think it is time he start acting like the Dom he is suppose to be. No more relying on all the women in his life to solve his problems for him. No more letting his slaves top him from the bottom, since that has been the only form of "domination" I've seen thus far from him.

I've love this series and wish to see it continue, but it is hard enough to suspend disbelief that all his female family are not only instantly accepting of incest, but instantly submissive, not only to the person who seduces them after only a single event, but to Curtis as well, who has had next to nothing to do with the actual domination of his harem.

Considering there isn't a cock in the world that can compare to the toys available, it is not enough for Curtis to have a big dick. He needs so much more than that for these women to believably submit to him. It's time for Curtis to step up and become worthy of the title of Master and it is also time for the women in his life to learn what total submission means. All this hierarchy stuff needs to go.

In the military, which is about as close to Master/slave as you can get in the real world, the most people anyone ever really presides directly over is about 3-4. Sure, a leader might command 10, 100 or 1000 men, but they effectively only preside over a few. Those few have 3-4 men each that they preside over and so on and so on. In Curtis' harem, Curtis is the Master and his women serve his needs. He can have who he wants when he wants, but he should really be delegating authority to Miranda and his mother and then they hold authority over the rest. Miranda and his mother would make sure the rest of the women are performing their roles and reporting their status to Curtis. If Curtis wants to interact with his grandmother, aunt, cousin or whoever else they bring in, he certainly can, but the story gets far too convoluted when this person dommes this person, but is submissive to that one, yet is on par with that one, etc. etc. etc. With a simplified hierarchy the story can have more focus and less needless exposition and pointless power struggles.

This brings us to Ellie. I never liked her and I feel the story wrote itself into a corner when it came to the relationship between her and his mother. That Domme/slave aspect needs to end, full stop. It is no longer believable that his mother is this wholly willing slave to Ellie, yet she never speaks about her and hasn't been with her since Vegas. I feel, if Ellie is going to be a part in this story then Curtis needs to stop being the pussy he has been and put her either in her place or banish her from their lives. It is clear this story has been mostly devoted to incest so for his mother to be torn between her service to Ellie and to her son and their family is bs, imo. Ellie needs to be written out of the series or beaten into willing submission. This is a perfect opportunity for Curtis to finally put his man pants on, stop being ordered around by his so-called slaves, lock the bitch in the basement for the week and bust her down until being the mat EVERYONE in the harem wipes their feet on is her dream come true.

Ultimately, the story is kind of getting repetitive. Each new chapter is some new family member getting seduced by someone other than Curtis and that new family member ends up submitting to Curtis, because big dick, and everyone loves everyone and three-hole-fucktoy and yadda yadda yadda. The sex has become repetitive as well, unfortunately. It's always the same thing over and over. There is no variety, and outside of incest, there isn't much kink. I think Curtis needs to explore more, kinkier avenues with his current stable of women rather than worry about bringing in more people just to do the same stuff he's done with everyone before. I'd like to see some watersports, BDSM and breeding explored in the series. I'd like to see less "Curtis has enough stamina and energy to fuck all his women multiple times everyday" to something a bit more believable and focus more on expanding the limits of his women. Helping them grow and discover their submissiveness. If his women want to give him everything he desires, then he needs to work hard at providing them with opportunities to demonstrate their submission.

As I said before, I do love this series and want to see it continue. It started out very hot with the incest angle, but it has devolved into a "How many different ways can we tell the same story" kind of thing. I like the harem aspect, but not every chapter needs to include a new member to the harem. I like that all the women love each other and appreciate when Curtis is with someone other than themselves, but I feel the story has lost track of the character arcs. The women have quickly become carbon copies of one another as there isn't much separating them as far as personality goes and considering everyone aside from Miranda is a blood relative, even the incest angle is starting to lose its luster.

This series has been great!! Thank you for taking time to write!!! More!! Please!!

Great story, get to ellie submitting to Curtis, but give her a good backstory as to why she doesn't like to submit to anyone

He truly cant be the Master if his Mom Pegs his ass--then all the other ladies will want a shot so how can he control the herd if things go that way---all the stories have been awesome--I agree with the other person to give more background on Elle before he takes her ass--u r one of the best writers here so keep him totally straight and those other titles seem great in how u direct the story

No pegging. Just... no.

he is a dom. Doms don't get pegged. ellie needs to be next

This has been the best series I've read in a long time. But Ellie has been absent for the last three mom, sister and niece. I believe it is time for Ellie to submit to Curtis and give up all three of her holes to Curtis in one session. with Curtis, Miranda his wife and Mom there to remind Ellie that Curtis is charge of all the women. I also think that Ellie should become Laura's full submissive so she knows her position in the family.

Next story is the entire family moves in together and to commission their new home have a family orgy.

that's my vote and plea for this amazing series!!!!

Yes Ellie needs to get fucked up her bitchy ass and shown she to is a submissive slut to Master Curtis and then At Curtis's direction Ellie gets fucked up the ass by all of the other sluts

These stories need to have illustrations! This is by far my favorite of all story lines!

Please continue this store bring Brittany back along with the other one shot characters. Maybe even sissy cuckold the ex while he watches his wife pleasure his ex-girlfriend and her husband while they use her. Maybe even use her and the pregnant proper teacher having to pleasure everybody at a party.

Ellie gets sodomized next please?

I would prefer that you avoid the pegging or having his ass fucked; I know some people are into that sort of thing, but I'm not. More importantly, I don't think it really fits with the overall tone of the story so far. At some point, you definitely have to deal with Ellie -- the current situation between her, Alexis, and Curtis is untenable. I could go into detail about my analysis of why I think it should be resolved a certain way, but I doubt anyone wants to read it, so I'll just note that Ellie's treatment of Alexis so far (both current and in flashbacks) seems to have some dark overtones that, if left unchecked, could endanger Alexis' health (mental, definitely, and possibly physical, as well), and that Curtis seems too protective to leave Alexis in that sort of situation.

Please have ellie ass fucked by curtis and then have him use all three of ellies holes

Also, Ellie getting assfucked sounds like lots of fun. So does Mom's utter submission. Truth or Dare could be quite interesting!

I throw my vote in for the truth or dare chapter! Probably not really much left to dare them, but i love that game :)

My vote goes for Ellie's ass-fucking. The bitch needs to be put firmly in her place.

These really need to be made in to movies (of course porn) with parts

Ellie next, her three cum slots filled at once, Curtis up her arse.

Loved the storys in this series. And vote for ellies ass to be taken by Curtis after she wilingly and finaly submits to him totally. Hope you add to this one. Will be wiating for it.

this story is one of the best incest story, I've read in a long time couldn't stop reading. But then again expect nothing less from this author.

Again, another enjoyable read. But I was hoping for some more Curtis- Miranda time, they are such a great couple. I believe that there is only one chapter left, so I'm a bit saddened that this series has come to an end, but you know what they say about all good things. I hope Elli finally gets rimmed and submits totally to Curtis. I really hope that Curtis does not get pegged, while it may be a turn-on to some, it would be a tragic event for me. But if it really needs to happen then it should be done by Miranda and only Miranda and the act be an exclusive kink of the couple IMO. Another 5 stars.

As much as I've loved every chapter I'll be honest with you I'm starting to get confused there's sometimes there's too many people going on 😂 I still love it

I hope you continue this sometime!!!

These stories are fun, but so far from any reality I have experienced in my 84 years that I can’t even compare these people with any I have known. Not even close. My cunt licking has been limited to only the one person I’ve been with-no orgies. If this happens as described, I’ve missed a lot of fun! Keep up the good work.

Continue this 5 star sries. If possible, please develop the characters in more depth/detail I would especially like their mental, emotional and psychic developed in more detain. For example, the reader knows that Alexis gave up the love of her life (Ellie) because she wanted a child (Curtis). 20 years later she has the opportunity to "marry" the first love of her life (Ellie) but refuses to loose/give up her son/master/lover for Ellie. I would like to read about how or why Ellie, Miranda, Nana, Elizabeth and Laura became what they are or thought they were.

As to future chapters, possibly subs could be punished by their masters.; switches could react to the punishment of their subs by their other master; the full and proper training of the subs, and the masters develop their abilities.

Such a hot series of stories. Please keep them coming and yes loved each one as they got better and better as the saga continued

I just discovered this series today and I’ve already cum twice - these are some of the most incredible stories I’ve ever read. Please, please continue with more! BTW - I think everyone needs to band together and help get Ellie knocked down into her rightful place. Master needs to take her ass once and for all. Thanks for the awesome writing and the double squirts today! 😘

We really need to see Ellie having her arse taken by Curtis and her accepting her true place in the hierarchy.

621. Second time around. I may cry - the last chapter listed many possible scenarios but I think there is only one, the orgy. Hope this is not the end as this saga seems to have a life of its own. It has been only 12 years since the beginning- time fore more!

Hot stuff, though it seems we don't get much character development. Just more females for the fuckfest. And still no Ellie's ass. Honestly if it's not taken soon, it's not even going to matter any more if it does eventually get taken. It'll be like "took you long enough, whatever". I sincerely hope that bitch gets put in her place in the next episode (or a later one, but not too late, if more are on their way).

Love this series. When will you release the next edition?