All Comments on 'While You Were Out...'

It most certainly should.

Must be the election or something but I don't give a fuck about Jerome, Leroy,Barrack, or any other black guy. I guess I need to find a new site, this one has gone to hell.

One of the most pathetic and uninspiring stories yet.

If you wanted to write a story about a sexual deprived wife. And if you wanted to get any sympathy for her well on those accounts you have failed. The story itself was too short. And you have picked the worst section to enter your first story. This section is really, really tough not just on first time writers but older ones too. So don't be too dispondent. This is your first attempt. And so far it hasn't gone well. But MY first stories were not good either. But listening to other people has helped. although I have to admit I am a stuborn sod and won't listen to everything. Anyway have a look at your story and think to your self "Is this what I wanted readers to see? And did my message get across?" so far the answer is no we haven't. BUT keep trying.

Don`t write anymore--YOU SUCK

Just a note to the author: Please don't be dissuaded by the want to be authors, who probably can't string enough words together to form one sentence.I enjoyed reading your story and found that it was erotic and very well descriptive of sex on the sly.The only thing I couldn't imagine is, that a man would want to leave a set of double D's, to do anything other than find life support, to resuscitate himself to go for another fling in the sack. If you aren't too pissed off at the naysayers who frequent this forum, I would like to read some more of your work. For a first time posting I thought you done well. Thanks for taking the time and effort to write and post your good story....Rich

Keep up the writing. It will improve. Too bad for the jerks who don't offer anything constructive. Just vitrol. Ignore them.

You stink.

You stink.

then read it. And the ones that think black sex takes people about as low as you can go can miss it altogether. This slut cheats on a husband that keeps her in her lifestyle. Maybe she can be a body for medical students to practice on and pay society back some for her wasted time and space.

Jerome! Daddy! Low level ir porn, not even fit for the sewage of the ir site.