All Comments on 'Widow Next Door'

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sbrooks103xsbrooks103x8 months ago

"A married man and a widow fell in love unconscionably." - "Unconscionably?" I think you meant unconsciously.

26thNC26thNC7 months ago

Widowed whore helps married man cheat. Bastard.

KarzaKarza7 months ago

There is some pacing and tonal confusion in the writing. The other spouses weren't even characters. There is a whole living person who has no role whatsoever

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I got married to the widow next door

She's been married seven times before

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