All Comments on 'World Class 01'

Had read same same plot by stupid wannabe writers-could you just wank your whatever using sandpaper.

...do you really want to make believe, t h a t was a story??

Sorry, mate, but that was nothing in my eyes. No plot, nothing developed, nothing seemed to fit - and then you boldly wrote the catastrophe you call an end??

You´ve got guts!

On the contrary, you oafs - it was a hot story. Tell us more, author!

A tale of a cheating cunt. What's so good about that? If you continue the tale and let the husband know the truth it will up it's value but for now it's just crap.

a dumb whore.

Drunken idiots doing stupid shit, this could cost a marriage.

How does an author do 'character development' with people who are falling-down drunk throughout the chapter? About the best we can guess is that such people are the type who will allow themselves to get FDD at a party welcoming them to the neighborhood!

Perhaps the next party will be a 'rail-riding' party OUT of the neighborhood! Hopefully, not a 'necktie party!'

you've given yourself a challenge. If the wife succumbs to blackmailing neighbors over and over with no sign of regaining any dignity or marriage stability, then you've failed. Good luck. 4*'s.

the righteous readers on here always crack me up. why? they come to a wank site to masturbate. the click on stories about cheating wives...it turns them on. they jizz on themselves. and then they get mad at the characters!

uhh, hello! it's fantasy! it's not real, didn't happen, wouldn't happen, which is what makes it exciting to jerk off to. it's text on a screen! not real. separate fantasy from reality, already....

swim trucks should maybe be swim trunks?

cuck shit.

i love the weak ass anonymous cuck who post 1* cuck shit on everything he doesn't like. all that is graffiti by someone to scared to own their own comments. don't read anything on here then Puss.

Is she a cheating bitch? Too early to tell.