All Comments on 'Yoga Retreat'

by Storyboy87

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hugplxhugplx8 months ago

Very hot story, but I'd have preferred to stay in the POV of the husband and 'seen' the action from the texts.

lc69hunterlc69hunter8 months ago

good husband, good wife, and good lover

LenardSpencerLenardSpencer8 months ago

Hi. Interesting story but... would have flowed much better if the thousand word errors and punctuation mistakes had been fixed! So, you need an editor or simply someone who knows the "written English". Keep writing. The more practice you do, the better you will get. Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Fun read, but sure could use some major editing.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good debut 👍

AlexJensenAlexJensen8 months ago

Enjoyed your story a lot. Interesting perspective. Would benefit from the help of the right editor/proofreader.

Never really understood a person wanting to see/hear their spouse getting it on with another but I’m starting to wrap my head around it.

Looking forward to your next work.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Enjoyed it ! Will there be another chapter ? I hope so.

Storyboy87Storyboy878 months agoAuthor

It's been edited now. Just waiting for publish

bownchimebownchime8 months ago

Good work, nice story. As someone else said I'd also have preferred it to be written from the husband's perspective, reading all those texts etc.

26thNC26thNC8 months ago

Cucked by yogi.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

There hasn't been one hot wife story yet, that I favored. 1*

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Not much.

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydog7 months ago

Stories told from the hotwife's perspective are among my favs. Of course I wanted her virgin ass to be fucked but I can get that elsewhere. Well written but again needed some editing. I'll put you in my favs and keep an eye out for these two hot milfs in the future. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

My wife if 5"6 My wife if five inch six? What? I enjoyed your story, but please proofread prior to posting, as the story was full of errors. Thanks for your work.

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