by Storyboy87
Very hot story, but I'd have preferred to stay in the POV of the husband and 'seen' the action from the texts.
Hi. Interesting story but... would have flowed much better if the thousand word errors and punctuation mistakes had been fixed! So, you need an editor or simply someone who knows the "written English". Keep writing. The more practice you do, the better you will get. Cheers.
Enjoyed your story a lot. Interesting perspective. Would benefit from the help of the right editor/proofreader.
Never really understood a person wanting to see/hear their spouse getting it on with another but I’m starting to wrap my head around it.
Looking forward to your next work.
Good work, nice story. As someone else said I'd also have preferred it to be written from the husband's perspective, reading all those texts etc.
Stories told from the hotwife's perspective are among my favs. Of course I wanted her virgin ass to be fucked but I can get that elsewhere. Well written but again needed some editing. I'll put you in my favs and keep an eye out for these two hot milfs in the future. 5 stars
My wife if 5"6 My wife if five inch six? What? I enjoyed your story, but please proofread prior to posting, as the story was full of errors. Thanks for your work.