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Debbie woke me up with a kiss. She thanked me for a wonderful night. Here's the funny thing as I got dressed she asked if she could call you and set up a private swap, not going through the party. I gave her your number before I drove home.
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"Sounds like you finally had the swap you were looking for. I can't wait for Debbie's call. John had the same idea and wants to share his wife with you. Oh, are you hard again?" I asked Doug as he I felt his hard cock push into my butt.
"I did have a good time and yes I'm hard. I guess those pills do help. I would love to show you." Doug said sliding his cock into my pussy. "We can talk about fucking our new friends after we are done."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoI like this story line and would like to see the next 2 chapters with the other two couples. Could even be a chapter with a full orgy of swapping.
Have to agree with the comments that there needs to be more description of the main characters' lives and interactions. Maybe show how their sex lives have improved (for both spouses). Yes, dialog could be better. . .
Of course, the story could do with some proof-reading and editing - almost ALL literotica stories suffer from those needs; you get what you pay for folks!
The comments that I don't really get are the ones that seem to think Kari is making out great and "poor" Doug is "suffering" - HUH? Sooner or later Kari will probably get a dud and Doug will wind up with a goddess. Some commenters seem to think Kari is being manipulative with Doug to keep swinging, again - HUH? Kari is just being sensitive to Doug's feelings; in this chapter she even arranges the key exchange to give Doug the partner that will likely be more fulfilling and succeeds in that quest.
Personally, I'd like to see some of the comments moderated - the ones that don't address the story or the writing. Stupid comments that indicate this is a cuck story - NOT!
I like this author's writing and want to see more.
mfj
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoThis story was a great improvement over the first parts. When we got to Doug’s story it seemed like a change in style. This change made the story clearer and easier to read.
Youamiover 5 years agotaylorsam
I have to agree with Anon's comments about getting your story draft read and tweaked by an editor or two. Sometimes as an author you are too close to the tale to see areas that could be improved. This tale was OK as far as it went. Getting dialogue between characters to sound realistic is a challenge to any wordsmith. Again, this is where another set of eyes can help.
