All Comments on 'Wasted'

This work flowed well to me. So many visuals

came into view. You weaved for thoughtfull poem

in a very clever way. sandspike

I felt a little wasted reading that. :) Great job, Imp.

I loved the clever word-play!

Fly

Infuckingcredible!

Remember that feeling well;

insightful

delightful

but oh the morning after;

no wonder they call it wasted.

You're poem gave me a hangover. Not crapola. Kudos.

what you could be talking about.

Can I sell you this bridge?

Havin a flashback. Brilliant stuff, imp

from the power and intensity of your words. Nicely done - the images and the alliterations blend so magically here. Brava!

the new twist of the words just blows me away. Powerful.

and powerful with despair and longing. Well woven

play on words.

"...elder bury whine..."

and many others ...still with a point easily seen. Loved it.

v~