by impressive
This work flowed well to me. So many visuals
came into view. You weaved for thoughtfull poem
in a very clever way. sandspike
Remember that feeling well;
insightful
delightful
but oh the morning after;
no wonder they call it wasted.
what you could be talking about.
Can I sell you this bridge?
Havin a flashback. Brilliant stuff, imp
from the power and intensity of your words. Nicely done - the images and the alliterations blend so magically here. Brava!
play on words.
"...elder bury whine..."
and many others ...still with a point easily seen. Loved it.
v~