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A simple smile crossed my lips.
"Of course, Helen."
She still held her gaze.
"That includes your mother, Dear."
Lilly suddenly popped up from my shoulder.
"Holy Shit Balls! Dad you fucked Gran Gran?!? Oh that's so fucking cool!" I could feel the blood swarm my face. I looked to Helen, confused.
"How...?" was all I could muster.
She just smiled. "I found the tapes."
"HOLY SHIT! YOU VIDEO TAPED IT? Oh we GOTTA see 'em!" Lilly stated with far too much enthusiasm.
"Maybe later Lilly," Helen said with a wicked look returning to her face.
Lilly bit my shoulder gently with a smile towards her mother.
"He gonna fuck you now, Mom?" She asked in such an innocent way.
"He'd better. He owes me at least that much," she responded.
Lilly slowly pumped my swollen member bringing it to its full potential. Helen raised her leg higher, bending at the knee as I scooted my hips closer. Our daughter lined us up, rubbing the head against her mother's lips.
"Mmmmmm. She's such a tease." Helen purred. Lilly only responded with an evil giggle as she pushed the head of my cock into my beautiful wife.
Her eyes held mine as my cock sank into her warm depths. Her lips parted in a silent moan. Her eyes sparkled with hungry lust.
Our bodies were pressed together as I lay in the incestuous knot of bodies between my daughter and her mother. Our hands traveling everywhere. Our breathing becoming as one.
I can't count how many times we expressed ourselves that night. It seemed to be an ongoing circle where one would end just as another got started. It wasn't until the sun started to rise that we fell for the last time panting and spent. The most peaceful of sleeps finally found us.
Since then, I'm sure you'll be proud to hear that we've started a new tradition here at the Crawford House. We've aimed to have it once a week, but it tends to be quite more than that. We've established a 'Family Movie Night.' I will bet you can guess what we watched the first time... and almost every time after that come to think of it. Basically those tapes we've made have been put to some very good uses. I can't wait for you to join us. Perhaps we can make a few more for our collection. I'm sure you'll get a real kick out of the newest additions already.
Anyway, I hope the warden has been kinder to you as of late. You need to remember to behave yourself so you get off early, okay? Until then, take care of yourself. The girls send their love.
Your Ever Loving Son,
Jack
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous6 months agoIs Celeste going to want Lilly to participate when Celeste fucks her own father?? Should have left Celeste out of it. And what was the point of the planned weekend with friends that got canceled?
Anonymous6 months agoHelen's pain is exactly the reason why I could never ever bring myself to do that to someone. Well that and the fact I just don't have a betraying bone in my body. I don't care if a hundred fucking models are offering themselves to be my 3-hole sluts for as long as they live, I just couldn't do it to someone. And I really don't understand how people in such happy marriages with every going for them could do that to someone they love especially after so long. I only wonder if I'll ever be able to find someone that feels exactly as I do. A long-shot at best, I know, but a man's gotta hope, right?
Once he was blindfolded it was obvious what was going on there. How can he not tell the difference between his wife and his daughter? Not plausible at all sadly. This whole thing kind of undermined the scene about her being hurt and betrayed. It all just felt so confusing. Ah whatever, it was pretty hot stuff, which I guess is what you were going for.
As for the gran, I'm guessing she's in jail for incest (or maybe something else) and he's just telling her what's been going on. I wish the Celeste thing had been handled better and he didn't fuck her, then Helen and Lilly could still have grown close during the time the dad was away, and the happy family threesome at the end could still happen. I mean Celeste wanted her dad so I think it would have been more fitting if she had gotten only that instead. But that's just me. I just find betrayal really sours these kinds of stories when done like this. Funnily enough I thought Helen was fucking around since very early on in part 1, but it seems I was wrong and she instead became the one that was betrayed.
Fuzzy_Kbearabout 5 years agoI've never been into the the hate fuck/rage passion thing. as soon as Helen kissed Jack after Slapping the shit out of him, I was pretty much done. I skimmed the rest of the story and it just fell flat. It should have been handled differently to be a great story, I was very disappointed it had some good high points over all but the low points through out it just ruined the overall story.
Anonymousover 6 years agoThat sums it up... Love the end! Answers my question from the 1st chapter... Gran got busted, and Jack is filling her in, on the new chapter... This whole thing was a great read!
Anonymousover 8 years agoInstead of building characters and believable situations, you chose to make him fuck every woman he layed eyes upon. Incest stories are about build up and convincing readers that it could happen, not about throwing in a lots of sex with family members.
