Echo Ridge B&B Pt. 01

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FseriesFseriesabout 2 years ago

Would have sold the place right off the bat. Would have never have suggest the wife take that spot. And would have divorced her if she did.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

like the concept of the B and B. Denise is HOT

rodryder44rodryder44over 5 years ago
ER B&B P1

I rated this as 4.9****s. You created a cuck-fest with both Steve and John letting their wives screw around although Steve's wife hasn't had her say in the story yet. The greatest leap of faith involves the number of beautiful wives available to fill the positions at the B&B who have business degrees. Can't wait to read the next part.

Zeb_CarterZeb_Carterabout 6 years agoAuthor
luedon interesting...

I guess I'll have to demand my money back from Grammarly as their software is demanding those apostrophes.

Or you could volunteer to by my editor.

Zeb

luedonluedonabout 6 years ago
I'm half-way down Pg.1 and annoyed

The rampant inappropriate apostrophes are annoying.

Zeb, please note: An apostrophe before an s indicates possession. Plurals don't have apostrophes unless they are also possessive.

Thus we may have The boy's football if the boy owns the football, or it may be The boys' football if the ball is collectively owned. If there are several boys without a any concern about ownership of the football, the plural is boys, not boy's.

The other place apostrophes are used is for contractions. You are becomes You're when contracted. And so on.

We of the Pedantic Grammar Police Force will pursue rampant inappropriate apostrophes to the earth's end.

Lue

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