- Incest/Taboo
- Ellie Ch. 01
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But she was aroused, too. She could feel her heart thudding, thudding, like the frantic beat of a drum. It was stupid, yes - but it was also the most exciting thing she had ever done in her life. She felt again the warmth of her brother's seed as it splattered like hot rain on her body, and the surge of lust that seized her: the irrepressible need to bathe in it, to gulp it down like clotted cream, to drown in it. The door that Henry Soames had unlocked but never opened had suddenly swung wide, and she loved what was on the other side. Jason was right: fooling around with your brother was amazing, and although she was walking a tightrope she could no more abandon it than saw off her hands with a blunt knife.
And so Ellen Elizabeth Paige drifted off to sleep in a state of excited trepidation, dreaming of how she would play the game and how much fun it would be.
(To be continued)
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Chapter 02 will be available two weeks after this story was published.
Copyright: Hot_Sister Jan16. This story is not to be reproduced in whole or in part without the express permission of the author.
- COMMENTS
ScottishTexanover 1 year agoIt's not a bad start, but it's not the best that I've read. Your depiction of how Ellie lost her virginity to Henry Soames is somewhat typical of most females realfirst time. From talking about it with every girlfriend that I have ever had, not a single one of them ever described it as a "beautiful and magical moment." One recurring theme was the guy popped her cherry only to dump her and never again ask her out. One of my exes described it as "hurting like hell" but at least in her case, the guy stuck around for a few more weeks and then they split up amicably.
The point that I'm trying to make is that most readers, myself included, are searching for an uplifting and heartwarming story to get a break from reality. Life sucks in reality, so I don't want dark stories to read even if they're an extremely accurate representation of what regularly happens.
A great writer can still make the story believable without real life accuracy. 4/5 At least you didn't overuse the word "pudenda" like you have done so many times before. Maybe you just hadn't learned that particular noun yet when you wrote this one. It is one of your earlier submissions. 😆 🤣 😂
Anonymousabout 2 years agoEL was just a whore, and after her fucking old Henry and getting fired the whore should have went for therapy instead of hounding the WEAK WIMP BROTHER
oldpantythiefalmost 4 years agoThis is the second time I've read this story and it's still as hot as can be. Makes me wish I had a sister like Ellen when I was growing up so we could have shared with each other. The slow buildup between brother and sister seems to be leading further to the incest we all are here for. Now, on to chapter 2. Thanks
Anonymousover 4 years agoOh! So deliciously good! I love their personalities, his boldness, her firm forwardness with her brother. How things are pulled out (heh heh, he said pulled out!) In the open and aired without a long delay.
I loved him putting in the effort to spend time with her and not just working at getting in her panties (hehe, the openings (!) Just keep popping up (!), Hehe;).
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
I know I've read this before, but it's been so long that I don't remember it! Yummy!!
