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The other girls more often than not get their own furs now which certainly helps us and completes their personal satisfaction. Heidi did it with gusto to the benefit of us all.
It seems my main problem with girls was mom. Now that mom is a part of my fucking life, I have no problems at all getting dates on my own, not that I want or need them anymore. I mostly get girls I think mom will like to play with now. I have mom do her thing with girls I bring over. Particularly if it's a girl I want around for awhile for play or that mom has taken a fancy to for herself. Even though we are partners in life now mom still likes her girls and their young bodies plus I've grown increasingly attached to Betty. Betty is increasingly into doing the other girls for fun along with mom and me. She was not only my first but, by far, the best and it seems most compatible with me and my mom. She has the same insatiable sexual appetite as my mom now. The three of us screw all the time.
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Anonymousover 2 years agoYou have an adventurist mind. This should be several stories. It feels as if you were rushing to get it down on paper before you forget.
Consider taking one scenario and fleshing it out to one shorter story with a beginning, middle and end. This may allow you to present the sensuality that you are thinking of in a slow and tasty manner.
Keep writing.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoYou get one star be because I couldn't give you a zero. This story is not even believable and has got to be the result of your fur fetish. (Nothing wrong with a fetish, mine is big nipples) There's not much of a story here and I gave up on it right away. Keep trying to write an erotic story. You just might get one some day.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoYour constant use of the words stiffy, twat, etc are a little on the childish side. I haven't used those words since high school. Also the tenses keep changing, and your grammar could use some work. With some cleaning up, and more mature terms it would be a good story.
