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"Free!" She roared as her multiple arms stretched outward in a fan formation. "Who has released me?!"
Her lower torso was serpentine while the rest was all woman. I noticed her eight hands making eight mystical gestures unknown to me. I knew Kuji Kiri, but this was something else.
"Ah! Your life is laid bare to me. You didn't know and yet you took the risk in releasing me." She laughed and smiled. "I will reward your foolhardy courage. I will show you the deepest shadow magic."
"May I know your name Lady?" I asked her and she seemed genuinely surprised.
"Strong! Stronger than I gave you credit for. Very well, I am Anackire I was born out of the first light and the unsullied darkness. I am balance and in you the world will know to fear the shadows again."
She kissed my forehead and I felt the rush of power and knowledge. A single crack of thunder rang in my ears as I was thrown back into my body. I was on my knees on a black sand beach as the tide came in. It was time to train. It was time to restore my energies.
Fade to black.
- COMMENTS
valjean5219 months agoIts a great story but the powers are developing too quickly and the challenges are too easy for the main character. I also think maybe he should exit the simulation and have some improvement in his real life.
Anonymousover 1 year agoDont know what everyone's on about. The writing seems like it's from a 4 grader.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoUnusual but a decent script. The characters were vast but didn't seem artificially linked. Read like a cohesive story.
Fixitman8267about 3 years agoNot a bad start. Since Part 1 and Part 2 are part of the same mission to kill the vampire queen (Snow White), they should be all one part. I don't see why you separated the mission into two parts.
