by Daphne123
Aww thanks for the nice words. I usually do sequels to stories that reach the "hot" status because obviously people want more. So maybe...
There was never a dull moment couldn't stop reading until the end.
Please write more of these. Maybe stories of how he seduced different kinds of girls. The good religious girl, the smart girl, etc.
These types of stories are my biggest fantasies and this one was amazing, the idea of making a girl beg for it and cum against their will is so sexy, thank you and I'd love more like this or a follow up
That was sooo good I actually came which I don't normally do while reading part of me wants to think of him coming back for seconds and end up loving her pussy more than he thought but I'm also a hopeless romantic but I loved the whole dynamic of it the restrained but she begs for it anyway
The power exchange is done perfectly. The characters are well drawn for a short story, and the sex is red hot. I'd love a sequel or the prequel where he impregnates her friend. Great work!
Well aren't you sweet! I'm glad this story got your motor running. I've gotten so much great feedback on this one. As far as it being autobiographical...well...I was a color guard captain when I was in high school, and this scenario was a big fantasy of mine at the time. As for whether or not it actually happened to me (either in full or in part) ...I'll leave that to your imagination. (wink) xoxo - Daphne
More please! I second the romance bit of it... Maybe her sister next?
I actually withdrew "Ravishing Kelly" because anytime I have a story that drops below 4 stars I delete it. I'll work on a revised version that hopefully will be rated better. I put a lot of thought and work into these submissions and take ratings very seriously. Higher ratings encourage me to write more so please take a moment to put a rating on the stories you really enjoy.
Ratings isn't an objective measure of quality. People might give lower rating just because they don't like some of the themes (this is especially apparent in cheating stories) or other reasons that have nothing to do with the quality of the story.
I liked this story and I would've loved to read "Ravishing Kelly" as well :(
loved the story, especially the 'humiliating' bits of it.. making her beg him to fuck her etc.. ;).
Weirdly i can't find rating.. can't seem to rate it, but 4.5/5* for me if i could.
Get the Kelly story back & I'll stroke it up for you. Would have given Renee 5* too. Would love to be Renee, even the life changing ending.
I came so hard playing with my own pussy while reading this. Amazing story.
Outstanding! Took me back to HS marching band, and the experiences I had with girls, and their friends!
I would love to see Renee with a small baby bump reluctantly give her mouth to the cock that knocked her up.
The entire backstory (and sequel) to Ravishing Renee is on Daphne's Den (link in my bio).