All Comments on 'Ravishing Renee'

by Daphne123

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KieranLoveKieranLoveover 6 years ago
Great Story

There was never a dull moment couldn't stop reading until the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love it!

These types of stories are my biggest fantasies and this one was amazing, the idea of making a girl beg for it and cum against their will is so sexy, thank you and I'd love more like this or a follow up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Omg

That was sooo good I actually came which I don't normally do while reading part of me wants to think of him coming back for seconds and end up loving her pussy more than he thought but I'm also a hopeless romantic but I loved the whole dynamic of it the restrained but she begs for it anyway

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Please write a sequel chronicling her pregnancy!

History_ProfHistory_Profalmost 6 years ago
Great story

The power exchange is done perfectly. The characters are well drawn for a short story, and the sex is red hot. I'd love a sequel or the prequel where he impregnates her friend. Great work!

Daphne123Daphne123almost 6 years agoAuthor
Autobiographical Comment

Well aren't you sweet! I'm glad this story got your motor running. I've gotten so much great feedback on this one. As far as it being autobiographical...well...I was a color guard captain when I was in high school, and this scenario was a big fantasy of mine at the time. As for whether or not it actually happened to me (either in full or in part) ...I'll leave that to your imagination. (wink) xoxo - Daphne

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot af

More please! I second the romance bit of it... Maybe her sister next?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Would love a sequel documenting her pregnancy!

wr5544wr5544almost 4 years ago

Great! I'd love to read a sequel!

Um_hi_im_shyUm_hi_im_shyover 3 years ago
Mmm

The pole part was so hot I loved it so much

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Holy fuck

I came so hard playing with my own pussy while reading this. Amazing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Outstanding! Took me back to HS marching band, and the experiences I had with girls, and their friends!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

this is one of the greatest of all time

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I would love to see Renee with a small baby bump reluctantly give her mouth to the cock that knocked her up.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good story. I hope there will be a chapter 2

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