All Comments on 'She's In Charge Ch. 01'

Loved it.. hope you write more soon

I liked it. I'm looking forward to part 2.

Good god that was amazing. The writing, the characters..mmn, I need more. Moar! Please <3

I'd recommend making the next chapter(s) longer, but overall it was a very good start to a story.

Nice job. It's a little rough, but for your first effort I'm impressed. Additionally, am I correct that English isn't your first language? If so, this is even more impressive.

I agree with the earlier anonymous commenter. Rough in certain ways, Maybe add a little more location context but there were some true moments of excellence. Keep it up!

do, please,...write some more!

I just loved it - want to know more - want to read more. Very nice imaginative setup but there's a back story begging to be told. I want to read it.

xoxo,

Di

More likely Jack sends her packing with a bloody lip. The end.

Wonderful story I am yearning to see the follow-up of Jenny and Jack! Please keep writing.

Looking forward to see how he ends up naked and get taken for his first time.

I'm about to read Ch. 2. I love the story line. can't wait for Jack to get more of Jenny. She could take charge with me anytime she wants.

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And locked the door. Utter nonsense.

Very nice start. Sexy, fun and enjoyable

Nice, fun and flirty start. Only 2 parts and after the first, in wishing for more.