Taken by the Viking Ch. 16

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The Wolf reached out in front of him and slid a report to the right across the desk, so it landed in front of Jordan. Picking it up, Jordan raised his eyebrows at the two photos in the file. Normally the Wolf just asked for general physical characteristics or sometimes personality quirks, if he asked for anything at all; it wasn't unusual for him to leave the choice entirely up to Jordan. This was the first time he'd ever asked for specific people.

For a moment, a very brief moment, Jordan was tempted to ask why. But he quashed the impulse. He was one of the few who could get away with questioning the Wolf, but he preferred not to. He followed where the Wolf led, as he always had, since it had always worked out well for him. The Wolf was the one who had basically saved him.

"Jordan." The Wolf was leaning back, still watching Pet and Toy on the screen although he'd muted the sound again. "You're going to need to give her a choice soon."

Every muscle in Jordan's body tensed. He shook his head, even though the Wolf wasn't looking at him.

"Why?" he barked out the question.

"You know why," the Wolf said, his tone gentle, sympathetic. "You've had a chance to show her what it would be like, how you'll take care of her, but it has to be her choice. Remember Trix and Chevie? She didn't think he was going to stay once he was given the option, but you made her give it to him anyway."

"Because you told me to." Jordan would have just let Trix keep Chevie. It had been obvious the man was better off here, in the compound, than he had been on the streets; that he'd been happy working in the kitchens and that Trix kept him well-satisfied. The Wolf had insisted the man be given the choice though, just like everyone else. The last time anyone had actually chosen to leave had been nearly a decade ago but...

His Trish wasn't like anyone else. She wasn't of Earth. Although she'd been lonely and looked down on in her position in life, she'd also been mostly safe, well fed enough. She hadn't been at the mercy of regular street gangs, starvation, and sickness, like so many of the civilians the Wolf's soldiers took. She wasn't even like the other Moonies. She wasn't excited by the same things - not the sexual decadence of the Wolf's compound, not Jordan's position at the Wolf's right hand...

Would she choose to stay?

Part of him wanted to rush back to his rooms and wake her... pamper her... give her whatever she wanted so that when he finally had to give her the choice, she would say yes...

But that wouldn't be honest. That wasn't who he was. It wasn't what it would be like if she did stay. Jordan had already been showing her what it would be like.

She seemed to like him well enough. Not like Marek and Laura yet, or Trix and Chevie, but she was no longer afraid of him. She talked to him. Asked him questions. But she hadn't been very happy with his short answers. That might be something he could change for her. He could be better at talking.

Jordan made a face. Well, he could try anyway.

"You'll have to ask her soon," the Wolf repeated. "If she wants to go back to her old life when Alex and Bella return to theirs, you will let her."

He nodded. He would. Because the Wolf had told him to. But he wouldn't be working for the Wolf much longer anyway after that. He could find Trish again, take her with him to Rio. It was one of the most beautiful spots left on Earth. One of the few areas that was both safe and preserved. Jordan could take her there, show her its beauty, show her the life he could give her there. She could still do her classes from there. He was one of the few people on Earth who could offer her a life in a place like that. Zadia said women liked beautiful places; even she'd said when she stepped down from the Wolf's service, she'd want to live in a place like Rio.

Trish would like it too. He'd make sure of it.

"Cora and Trace will be here in a few hours," the Wolf said. "They want some time with Pet and Toy before they go. Make sure we're prepared to receive them, and then you can return to your little one."

As Jordan left, the Wolf turned the sound back on to listen to Pet and Toy's conversation. Thankful he didn't have to stay for the boring debate, Jordan hurried away to give the necessary orders for Cora and Trace's arrival. The sooner he finished, the sooner he could return to his Trish.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

WTF! Jordan is an asshole who just wants her as a sexbot. He shouldn't have hit here over her studies as that's something she's been away from and needs to work through on her own. Moreover, he should just let her have something that is her own. I could only scan through that part of the 'games' as I started to feel ill - she clearly wasn't into it but he just doesn't give a fuck. He just wants her to depend on him so he can feel better about himself - he's not saving her, he's fucking traumatizing her! I wanted to like this story but this is where I get off the boat.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Re: Anon on 25 July ‘17

Very well said, you hit the nail on the head with everything you said.

It made me cringe when he was forcing orgasms, that kind of thing is incredibly painful.

I am actually interested in the plot as well as the sex, so occasionally I skim past unsavoury aspects. I mentioned in a comment in an earlier chapter that she’s stuck in a sexual fog, unfortunately it then crossed my mind that what he’s really doing. Grooming, even the word makes me want to vomit. It’s a bizarre situation for a victim of abuse to read a non con story, fortunately everyone here is an adult, so I’m able for the most part to separate the two things.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Yess!

Loving where this is heading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I HAVE TO AGREE WITH ANNON...

I was just coming down to make a similar observation/comment, but Annon. pretty much hit on every cylinder I was going to address. I especially didn't like the "games" with Trish and Laura. That in my opinion is in the same realm as tickling and begging someone to stop...you're not enjoying it even if it looks like you are, and she begged him to stop. I did not like that part at all. If I were to agree to stay with him there would definitely have to be strict ground rules of what he can and cannot do. He sure as hell lays those out for her and makes them up as he goes (and she has no choice in the matter)! I was really hoping that an actual mutual relationship would form between them...not just him dictating what the relationship will be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I understand this fantasy story what I don't understand are commentors

Saying they would like someone like Jordon. I don't want to come off as shaming, be who You want to be with who You want. But do you really want a man who will do anything he wants to you sexually no matter what you say or do and will only stop doing a certain thing if it causes you so much stress you suffer a massive crying jag? Do you want a man who only understands your limits after breaking them? Who makes you participate sexually with others when you don't want to? Someone who will change every behavior of yours he doesnt like with pain? Besides we have never seen Jordons reaction to true opposition from a sex partner. We have only seen Trish try to politely dissuade him and she has only physically hit him once which was a slap, that resulted in 5 mins of spanking. What would he do for a punch? If he was sworn at? Told he was hated? We have never seen these reactions. This is why I'm confused about people's desires to have someone like Jordon.

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