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For one of them, a dream might come true.
For me, maybe mine already had.
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NEXT: CHAPTER 13
- COMMENTS
MADDOGINTEXASalmost 2 years agoWhat an 'ending'...just at the good part, making the baby and...??
The break-up with Brianna had me crying, finally...I needed that catharsis from reading the previous chapter, and now this one...
The French girl saving was awesome, as was the meeting in the airport...Brianna actually got to confirm the story and see the girl David saved; meet the parents, spend a flight to LAX together.
Glad David and Bree are talking; they work together, so it has to be awkward...still, 'Sudoku' keeps them together...
And, what do you mean, David is gonna get a dose of reality soon...that sounds TOO OMINOUS...be nice to us (¿Please?)
srbh96over 7 years agoGreat chapter! I kinda expected this to happen....knew it was a possibility when cherys and dani broke up and the reason was having children who were half her and half her partner's. Good job though! Seriously bring amber back.
Anonymousover 8 years agoOK, so I called this, but it was still really well done.
Now all you have to do is get Amber back into the picture!
Jason
LUSTYWHEELSover 13 years agoThe last 2 installments have been very good and I'm glad David is giving Cheris a child. Now David better marry amber and all will be well or He could become part of Dani and Cheris's relationship. I have enjoyed the story very much, so much that I have spent 2 sleepless nights pondering what I have read. So many ups and downs great work but I cant believe Amber wont talk to him nor does it make sense why she pushed him into a rebound relationship.
Thanks 4 every thing I'm done bitching now :)
Anonymousover 15 years agoThe way you write your stories is just amazing.
I actually hate you for that because I've got my bachelor graduation presentation in just a couple of days, and I can't stop reading.
Only one note: on page two, Claudine says "Oi! We go to LAX and from there back to Paris!"
But yes in French is spelled "Oui".
Keep on writing!
