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Click here"You weren't expecting that, were you?"
Donna shook her head and looked completely bewildered by the events of the moment.
"Are you upset? Do you feel the same about him?" she asked softly.
Donna looked up at Annette. "Yes ... I've known for a while I'm in love with him. I wanted him to say that ... to tell me that he loved me. I guess I wasn't ready for it when it happened." she said carefully.
"Men ... they never get the details right ... do they!" Annette snorted.
"Well ... better to hear the good news that way than the bad news." Donna said with a small smile. They sat for a while in silence. Donna was slowly regaining her composure.
At that moment, there was another soft tapping at the door. Annette stood and opened it to see Maurice standing there with a serious expression.
"Donna. That phone call ... it was his mother calling. Jack's father has died." he said in a somber tone.
"Oh my god!" Donna jumped up from the toilet and pushed past Annette and Maurice out the door to find Jack.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoI find it unusual that someone who’s had only one partner is so sexually confident with someone new.
KarenEabout 9 years agoI don't remember what happens, I'm worried about the description later about an "old flame".
I hope it doesn't mess up him and Donna.
DesertPirateover 16 years agoSorry I missed this when it posted. A really good story with a few twists to kep me jumping. The declaration of love at dinner was perfect, most of us guys have done as bad or worse. Have fun and keep them coming.
Anonymousover 16 years agouse a coma rather than a period when a sentence is not done ---- e.g: "John, please, come her," I heard my mother said ---- and your already very good story would be at least 50 percent better. <p>
Why do you keep writing: <p>
"John, come here." my mother said?, <p>
when it is obvious that you yourself KNOW that that is ONE COMPLETE SENTENCE (not two)? You don't even capitlize the "m" in the word "my", so YOU KNOW, it is just one sentence, no? A COMA --- not a peroid --- needs to go between the words HERE & MY!
