A New Dawn Ch. 06

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"I thought about that," the chief said. "You and Meyer have been on deep undercover assignment, approved directly by my office. Even your captain would have been unaware. So you're back now, all badged up."

"Really? What were we doing undercover? Usually coming back from that is accompanied by a big-assed story of wrongs being righted."

"I can't talk about it. Neither can you. It involves the feds and national security."

"Convenient," I said. "And pretty good thinking."

"So... are you in?"

I knew that I could speak for Meyer. "We're in," I said.

I heard the chief sigh. "Thanks, Johnny," he said. "Can you come in today?"

"Okay," I said.

We hung up and I called Meyer and filled him in.

"Oh, great," he said. "I always wanted to be a cop."

"Did you always want to be a rich cop?"

"Never crossed my mind," he said. "I have no idea how to get rich on my own. It was useful to have a little help from my friends."

"The Beatles lyric was better," I said. "Any idea how to approach this?"

"Well... we could sit back and relax and do cop work for a couple of years until we work a case that somebody doesn't want to see go all the way."

"True," I said. "But I'm not sure I still want to be a cop that much, for that long."

"We've got to find out who's been getting into the evidence room, and who's been making rookie mistakes on cases, and figure out why."

"Agree. Let's talk to the chief this morning. We need to know what to come back as. I'm not sure Robbery Homicide is the best job for us to figure this out."

We talked strategy a little more and agreed to meet at PAB at 8:00.

"Oh, and Johnny..."

"Yeah?"

"You might want to shave the beard before you rejoin the force. You look like an Asian hippie."

"It's my undercover beard, asshole. It'll lend a stamp of verisimilitude."

"Sure. Don't your girls find it scratchy?"

"Your girl doesn't," I said, and hung up.

---

I told my girls what was going on. They were less than thrilled that I was going to be a cop again, even if it was just for the length of this assignment. There's a certain amount of everyday risk that goes along with the badge, even if you're a detective, and even if you're just pretending to be a detective. They didn't like it.

"This is going to be major boring shit," I said. "Going through logbooks and case files, talking to other cops, trying to figure out patterns."

"You have a way of taking boring shit and turning it into shit that gets you hurt," Dawn said.

"Not this time," I said. "Besides, Meyer will be with me. What could possibly go wrong?"

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tsgtcapttsgtcapt7 months ago

A cliffhanger, well planned out, great flow, and.... thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I thought "Houston, we have lift off" was my favorite line in the whole story (New Dawn 1-6)... until just now, when I read Meyer's response to Johnny telling him the Chief's idea of them coming back to the force to investigate this new case - the absolutely perfect Meyer (and perfect cop-humor) response:

"Oh, great," he said. "I always wanted to be a cop."

There have been plenty of great lines, including Johnny's response to Meyer's question about whether Johnny's girls didn't find his beard scratchy. But you've had terrific lines throughout this whole saga (and I use that word in the best sense), including Meyer's addition to the ladies explaining to Johnny why they made sure there was always one of them nude, holding him through his fever sweats (or Johnny's response to Meyer for that matter). It is one more aspect of your writing that makes it a delight to read (and that is maybe the 2nd or 3rd time I've ever used "delight" in a sentence in my whole life). By the way, I believe I've noticed a comment or two about some aspect(s) of the story being unbelievable. Yeah? So f-ing what? Its a STORY!

Great job, great story, great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I don't usually leave comments about the stories I read on Literotica but just felt I had to say how much I'm enjoying this A New Dawn series, it's brilliant despite being a bit unbelievable. I can't wait to see what happens next, Chucks, please keep up the good work, another FIVE.

NICHOLXNICHOLXover 1 year ago

Another FIVE. Fantastic series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent erotics but I just loved the new twist about going back to help the chief.

5*

BJ

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