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orie
orie
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"Yes, very, very, very bad," Devin said.

"I guess something that bad deserves punishment," I said.

"That's up to you," she replied. After a pause, she added, "Master."

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Thanks for taking the time to read my story. If you would like to leave a personal comment, you can respond through Literotica or you can always email me from your email at the contact on my profile. If you choose to vote, it helps me understand what you like or don't like. I debated about putting this in the BDSM category, but ultimately decided to go for Group Sex. Do you think I made the right choice? I am eager to hear from you. Was it too tame, too much—let me know? I am deeply grateful for editing and review by Perry. If there are mistakes or glitches, please know that the fault is with me, not Perry and not the stars.

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DadiesdreamsDadiesdreamsabout 1 month ago

Definitely very hot story, Had me drooling, waiting for him to fuck Devin and the two girls to fuck.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Beautifully described journey into mild domination and the liberation of Devin.

Any chance of a sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This definitely went to a darker place than most stories I read. But it was also very erotic. I really enjoyed the climax denial.

That being said, when the sex began, it could have been much more descriptive. And Devin never did get her ass fucked.

Overall I did enjoy it though, and would have liked more!

As I still can't log in, (are you reading this literotica.com?!) I have to sign this,

Yarnspinnerr ;->

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I absolutely loved the final word of the story, total icing on a gorgeous cake.

P_AndererP_Andererover 2 years ago

Should have had Joshua fuck Devin's ass... split the bitch.

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