The Things You Make Me Feel Ch. 07

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"I don't want to hide, my love... to stand in the darkness while others..."

He kissed her lips tenderly. "Me neither... but for the time being, we have to, until I figure this out, and I will figure this out. I swear on my life I will."

She nodded. "I trust you... I trust you with my heart and life."

"And I won't fail you, dearest. And to prove that to you, I am ready to... tickle you!"

"NO! OLIVER, PLEASE!" Ellie convulsed with laughter at his well-directed tickles. "Baby... at least... give me time to... b-breathe..."

A minute later, after he was certain he had lifted his sister's spirits, he agreed for her to breathe.

"Thank you for that, lover," she said cheerfully, suddenly feeling that they could take on the whole world by themselves.

"Any time, my pet," he replied in the same gleeful manner, relieved that he'd managed to perk her up.

She put her arms around his backrest and propped her breasts on his shoulders, locking his neck in her deep crevice. She kissed him, a deep loving kiss, while enjoying the feeling of his swelling member along the groove of her behind.

She pulled away, grinning. "Now what's that I hear you're planning to skip work tomorrow without telling me."

"Why?" He trailed his finger across her pouty lips. "What's it to you?"

"Take a guess."

"Ellie, don't. I don't want you to get fired for—"

"I don't give a shit about my job, Oliver. I only care about us. That's all I care about."

"But you—"

"I don't wanna hear any more about it, hon. I'm spending the day with you and Michela tomorrow, and it's gonna be perfect."

"Is it? The last time you joined us, I ended up hating that day."

"You did?" Ellie whispered in mock empathy, knowing full well what he was talking about.

"Yeah. It's actually a grieving day. I marked the date on my calendar as the day I mourn the wreckage of my tender heart."

"Oh, my poor baby..."

"Another word coming out of you that it isn't a plea of some sort, and you can forget being invited."

"I'm sorry, my love, so sorry... but you do know I also had my heart broken that day, don't you?"

He sulked. "I guess."

"Well, tomorrow will be nothing like that day; I give you my word."

"I don't know," he feigned reluctance, unconvincingly.

Ellie giggled, loving their game. "Will that help my chances?"

She pulled her large milky breasts back from him and began massaging and kneading them. She spat in her hand and stroked the pink tips, and blood quickly made them swell and protrude. When they stood proudly, she pricked his lips with her erect nipples, provoking him to suck on them, which he gladly did. Several soft whimpers later, and Ellie knew she had him.

He popped her nipple out and gave her a long studying look. "You know what? I'm ready to take my chances with you, kiddo."

"Oh my god, really?! I had no idea it would work..."

"Right," he chuckled. "On the roads at 9."

"Yay!! Thank you, my love; I won't disappoint you."

"You'd better not. Now put the girls back in your bra before I'm tearing your pussy apart here."

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Alright, I'll say it: there's just too much sex and description of it going on here at times. It's like 5% plot, 95% constant sex and detailed narration of it. It's kind of boring after a while. Less in more!

Goddamn Michela is just adorable. It's a tragedy that her mother didn't survive birthing her to see the wonderful little girl she is. Of course, then there'd be no story for Ellie and Oliver so there's that. When his daughter was all upset and he got into the bath in his clothes to hug her... damn it, you're trying to make me cry aren't you!?

A bar brawl really? This Jason kid just doesn't know when to quit. And the timing was just all too contrived. Glad he got fucked up. Calling Ellie a whore... well I guess if there were any lingering doubts about him, they're gone now. Nothing but a sad, vain, prideful thug. Good riddance.

Ellie's little speech about their love not being wrong but rather it's the world that's wrong... powerful stuff. And I completely agree with it. Beautifully spoken. She needs to tone down the insecurity a notch though (Oliver as well while we're at it). I wonder how her behaviour will be affected given that Oliver has said he wasn't wanting any more kids and she desperately does. Granted someone else asked the question and he wasn't giving it full consideration, but to hear even that, you know what Ellie is like.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

the dialogue, straight out of some amateur gonzo porn video, is just too hilarious. This parody of erotica is unbelievably funny and on point.

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticover 1 year ago

What I like in this series is that sex is important because is linked to the loved person and is special because it is with that particular person. In most other stories on sites like this, characters dont mind who have sex with. Fortunately, this is not one of those stories and I thank the author for that.

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 2 years ago

**5** stars, again...I see from the other comments that I am quite late with mine, as 11 chapters are done....still, I am looking forward to reading the rest of the series!!

Ellie needs to stop the "I'm gonna kill myself, if..." thoughts....makes her appear too needy and selfish...

I LOVE MICHELA, she is the sweetest thing; the separation anxiety is somewhat normal at that age, especially for a lone child who has lost her mother, and had Daddy to herself for so long; this is going to be fun, her and Ellie...and the future babies...

Dave...FUCKER...needs to tone down his business, be supportive of Oliver and Ellie, instead of torpedoing the relationship...his letting Jason know where they were going was SSSOOO WRONG! He is making too much trouble...

Oliver...just, YYYAAAYYY for him, keep it up!

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