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"You don't have to hold my hand," Joanna whispered worried about her friend's public persona.
"I know, I want to," Melanie smiled and squeezed her hand. "It's not like we're making out in front of these people. Although if Michael keeps staring at you, I may have to stake my claim," she said making Joanna laugh.
The ceremony was beautiful and with all of the participants and guests in the nude Joanna wasn't as uncomfortable as she thought she might have been. It had been the craziest three months of her life getting to this day but wrapped in the cocoon of love she had with her best friend and lover she knew it had all be worth it, just to be here holding Melanie's hand. Not in her wildest dreams had she ever considered that standing on a pristine beach in the nude holding her lesbian lover's hand in front of a small crowd and watching her son get married would be one of the best days of her life.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous10 months agoAlthough it’s a romance I think it should have been put in different category I was disappointed ☹️
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe numerous spelling and grammatical errors, together with the two distinct characters named Joanna, frequently made the story hard to follow. The story line was also pretty strange at the end. The abrupt break-up between Joanna and Matt was totally weird. It was not surprising that they would have a fight, but it made no sense at all that neither one would make any attempt to come back together, given the intensity of their relationship and the positive things that had come out of it.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoThe errors mentioned were not insurmountable, but I did spend some time wondering why studying flora and fauna would be a feature of a wedding. The word for nudist is "naturist" (unless Australia thinks differently). But a good story, nevertheless.
Hope you are well.
ender2k2kalmost 5 years agoThanks. I hope you are doing well and I am looking forward to the next “12 Tables” chapter.
