Valentine's Surprise

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"You misunderstand me Justine." He answered.

Shocked, confused but hopeful, I raised my body back up and looked at him.

"What do you mean?" I asked.

With the patient voice I knew so well he spoke. "Of course, I want you Justine. GOD! I want to be inside of you so bad it hurts. But not here...not now. Your first time should be special, in a comfortable place, not on some random picnic table out in the middle of nowhere."

The warmth of love I suddenly felt consumed my entire being. THIS was the man I fell in love with, so concerned with others that he was willing to forego his own desires in order to please me. It was the happiest moment I've ever felt, and I wanted him more because of it. Leaning down I kissed his lips and looked him in the eyes.

"My Sam...my brother," I said, "you can't possible know how happy you've just made me but understand this. Wherever we are, it already IS special as long as we're together. Whatever we're doing, then KNOW it's what I want to do to make you happy. I told you before that I am yours, heart, mind, body and soul. You can use me however you want but right now...PLEASE!...make love to me. I don't WANT to wait anymore. I want you to be my first, and only, lover. Later you can control when and how we are together but right now, please do this for me."

His gripped relaxed, then his hands slid around to my ass and he pulled me forward then backwards, sliding my pussy up and down the length of his cock. I felt it spread my labia and the tip of it caressing my clit. Each time it did, tiny spasms shook my hips. Closing my eyes, I relished the feel of him so close to being inside of me. My juices combine with his pre-cum, creating a delicious feeling. My pussy was on fire and I could feel the heat from him as well. Passion over rode patience and desire overtook me.

Leaning forward I reached down and grasped him, putting the tip of his shaft at my entrance. Just that little bit shook my body in a mini orgasm. His hand wrapped my hair and jerked my head towards him. Surprised I opened my eyes to see his inches from mine.

"Keep your eyes open and look at me." He demanded.

The power...the strength...the sheer manliness made me quiver in anticipation.

"You're in control right now but go slow." He said. "Take your time but DON'T look away from me."

Nodding, I eased myself down on my brother for the first time. He was so huge, bigger than any of my toys. My pussy was stretched further than I have ever felt with only the first few inches. I wanted to close my eyes and relish every inch as he penetrated me, but I kept looking at him. I had been worried that it was going to hurt but because I had been aroused and wet for most of the night, he slid inside of me easily, pushing my walls aside, forcing them to accommodate his girth.

I didn't stop until I felt the tip of his cock touch my cervix and gasped. Nothing I have ever done before could have prepared me for that glorious feeling and I came again, legs twitching uncontrollably. Even though he ordered me to watch him, I couldn't help but look down and gasp at the sight. Despite being so deep inside of me, there was still an inch or more of him that was outside, waiting to push further. For the first time in my life I regretted my height and I was afraid I would never be able to take him completely inside of me, but I refused to give up. I refused to deny him the full pleasure of my body. I knew this was going to hurt but he deserved all of me and I was determined to give it to him.

Looking back into his eyes I waited for the tremors to subside then took a deep breath and slammed down as hard as I could, grinding my pelvis into his. The shock I saw in his eyes was nothing compared to the sudden pain I felt as his cock penetrated my womb and I yelled. I cried as the pain spread and couldn't help but close my eyes even though I knew that would disappoint him.

"Justine," he said, worry in his voice. "are you okay?"

Eyes still tightly shut and tears leaking from the corners, I just nodded and didn't move. I remembered the pain when I broke my own hymen but that was nothing compared to this and for the first time tonight I felt truly scared. What if it was going to be like this every time? How would I be able to fully please him?

Then something strange and wonderful happened. The pain subsided and gave way to pleasure. I opened my eyes and looked at my brother deeply as my body slowly adjusted to the welcomed invader. All my fears melted away and I rose up a few inches then back down again. The pain was less and the feeling of him fully inside of me filled my heart with love as I knew that I can take him completely into me. That I will be able to satisfy him fully.

Every time I rose up and back down, the pain lessened until after a few minutes there was only pleasure. His cock spread me like I have never felt before and I was in heaven. I could feel every inch of his glorious manhood. The fire inside me was fanned to a roaring furnace as I moved myself up and down.

His eyes, full or worry before gave way to wonder, then to bliss as I started to raise higher, barely keeping him inside of me then dropping back down again. Each time he penetrated my womb, shocks of pleasure coursed through me. I felt his cock twitching and guessed he must be close to cumming again. Raising an eyebrow, I silently questioned him, and he smiled, then nodded.

I didn't think I could cum again but that wasn't important. This was for him and I would take pleasure in giving it to him. Thrusting myself down on him I stopped, then started rocking my hips back and forth, rubbing his cock all inside my pussy. His soft pubic hair was scratching and teasing my clit, coaxing it out from its hood. I felt his hands on my tits pushing me upright then his fingers once again rolling my nipples around.

He had his eyes closed and head tilted back, biting his lips trying to hold back his orgasm.

"Don't hold back brother." I said. "Cum in me...cum inside your sister. Give it all to me. Claim me and make me yours. Fuck me. Fuck your sister. Shoot inside your sister's womb."

His eyes snapped open and looked at me in wonder as I begged and pleaded with him to cum inside me. I could tell the dirty talk was getting to him as his cock was starting to get impossibly hard and swelling inside of me.

"FUCK ME Sam!" I yelled. "FUCK your slut sister and cum!"

"OH SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!" He yelled and bucked up into me, penetrating even deeper than before and I felt his sperm splashing the walls inside of me, coating my womb in hot lava, filling me so completely that it was being pushed out with every thrust of his hips and dripping down our legs.

I was wrong...completely mistaken...totally taken by surprise when the greatest orgasm I had ever felt slammed into me. His orgasm had triggered my own and my body jerked wildly as I thrashed on top of him. I could feel my knees scraping on the picnic table but didn't care. My scream split the night. I was a banshee, wailing with pleasure until out of breath. I don't know how long it lasted but it seemed like hours. I smiled to myself and thought, 'apparently I could cum again'...then darkness.

**********

Justine had screamed for so loud and so long as I was cumming inside of her I was truly amazed. Her thrashing uncontrollably on top of me had driven me to new heights of pleasure and I was in shock and awe of her. Then, all of a sudden, she was completely still, then collapsed and scared the hell out of me.

Crawling out from under her I gently laid my sister on the table and used our clothes for a pillow. I was frightened that something terribly wrong had happened but as I felt her pulse and saw her heavy breathing, I quickly realized what had occurred. Slowly caressing her face, I waited until she returned to consciousness.

I was worried about our future. If she same so hard the first time she had sex that she actually passed out, could it get any better after this? Is everything else downhill from now on? Was the pinnacle of her sex life already reached the very first time she got fucked? How the hell can we keep our new life a secret if she screams like that all the time?

What really surprised me the most was that I didn't feel a shred of guilt or remorse. We had just committed incest, but I didn't care. I knew that what we felt was the most intimate and beautiful thing that two people could share and no matter the consequences, I was NEVER going to give that up. I would do anything, fight anyone, go anywhere to keep my sister MINE!!!

As I pondered these questions my sister's eyes started to flutter open.

"Hey," I whispered. "You going to live?"

Her eyes tried to focus on mine, but it took several minutes. Finally, they cleared as she looked at me and smiled. Reaching up, her lips met mine in a kiss so soft and sweet that I couldn't help but get aroused again. Controlling myself I cupped her cheek in my hand and asked.

"Are you okay?"

"Oh my God." She replied. "Is that going to happen every time we fuck? I don't think I will survive long if it does."

I chuckled, kissed her again and responded. "At least you'll die happy."

Wrapping her arms around my neck she pulled me close and tight. Nibbling my ear, she whispered.

"I love you Sam. Thank you for this."

"I love you to," I said. "and it was most definitely my pleasure. Now, if you're felling up to it, we really need to go home. I'm not sure what time it is but I don't want to have to explain anything to Mom and Dad right now."

Justine just groaned and replied, "Can't we just stay a little while longer? I don't want to go back to hiding my feelings just yet."

I looked at her for a moment and considered everything that had occurred and everything she had told me tonight. Smiling wickedly, I slapped her thigh hard, leaving a hand print then said firmly.

"Don't argue with me. Get your ass up and moving little girl."

"EEEEEEEEEEPP!!" She shrieked looking at me with wide eyes. Then they softened as she got up and grabbed our clothes.

"Yes Sir." She said. "Sorry Sir. Please don't punish me."

I could see the twinkle in her eyes as she said it and, smiling to myself as we dressed, I was suddenly looking forward to our future together with greater enthusiasm.

"Well see." I answered. "I think some punishment is justified. I will have to come up with something appropriate."

Stretching up on her toes her lips reached for mine. Bending down I met her lips and we kissed. I was amazed again how familiar it felt, like we had been kissing our whole lives.

"Happy Valentine's Day Brother Mine." She said. "It was the BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

The End.

Thank you for reading to the end and I hope you enjoyed it.

This is the second full story I have written and look forward to all your comments, good or bad.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There was SO much good in this story, too much to list. My favorite part was the (very rare) merging of the "nerdy sister transformation into breathtaking bombshell" trope with the biological brother-sister incest story. But that wasn't all. Most of the chemistry between the two was great. The sex was HOT (medically possible or not).

I personally loved that she was a "virgin who broke her hymen on her own." That's another trope I rarely see, and that makes it all the more rare that it's merged with the two other niche "check boxes" of m/f twincest and bookish-to-stunner.

There were things I didn't like, such as the ludicrous penis girth (that's as thick as both of my wrists put together, my dude) and the "master-slave" stuff near the end. I also was kind of disappointed that the protagonists stooped to engage in petty high-school drama instead of turning their backs on it, but then they ARE teenagers...

Anyway, my score is 4.5 stars, which gets rounded up to 5. This story was deeply satisfying, all in all. Good job!

Sonnyw55Sonnyw55about 3 years ago
Good Story

I enjoyed this story. Is there going to a part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
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I didn't like the cruelty at the end. jerk stories repulse me. 3 stars

DrhwnoelDrhwnoelabout 4 years ago
Words escape me. Just plain Wow!

I wish I could give you twenty stars. This has got to be one of the most wonderful stories I have ever read. Not jus on Literotica, but ever. Thank you for sharing your vision with us, with me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved the story 5 stars

But for the life of me I can't see leather skirts as being sexy. I google images of sexy leather skirts, but didn't see anything that impressed me. The women looked sexy, the skirts not so much. Once I removed the word leather I saw quite a few very sexy skirts.

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