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Click hereThey all moved to get cleaned up and Sophia got enough clothes back on so she could get home. Another Sunday night finished as the trio hugged and kissed goodnight and all went to sleep in their own beds.
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Hope you liked this chapter. I had some fun writing it.
Good comments and helpful suggestions are always welcome.
-GfG.
I'm enjoying the theme/concept. 4 stars. I struggle with some of the writing.. Others have comment on your shifting "person" here is an example of in one half a paragraph you switch . tell me how is the "our" and the "me":
"Getting his mind back in the game he resumed his piston movements getting full benefit of his cock length with a controlled thrust. Sophia was moaning as she relished our threesome and stepped up her oral onslaught of Linda's snatch while also increasing her pressing back into me."
a quick proofreading can catch all of this. This is just one example.