- Loving Wives
- Let Go
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Click hereBev learned some of the local language and one of her favorite phrases meant, "Let's get into the pool naked and fool around." At fifty-six, Beverly could still rock a bikini. When she bothered to wear one.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 21 hours agoGood story, but the author just rambled on for the last few pages. They were superfluous and dragged it down a bit. Still a solid 4*
Anonymous4 days agoWhy the changes back and forth from third person to first person, Within the same paragraph even, on pages three and four and so on? If you need to, get an editor or a proofreader or something. It's really distracting. As well as bringing up parts for a car that never went anywhere, and way too rushed of a reconconciliation - made it very unrealistic.
onlythelonelylove12 days agoThe only thing that I feel disquiet about is the grandfather. Yep—I am pretty certain that the story looks different from his perspective; I wonder if he was really drinking? I wonder if he was, did that coincide with the process of the radical absorption of his family into another family that used his grand-daughters to mediate their own dysfunction? There is a dark underbelly to this story—the ruthlessness of competitive business practice turned on others in the service or name of a “higher purpose”?
Gadf7723 days agoGreat story ! I've read it about 4x now and will probably come back to it from time to time.
