What a Fool Believes

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She burst into tears, ran across the entry as best she could in her heels and threw her arms around me. She pressed her cheek to the top of my head and all those curls covered me like a veil. "I hate being mad at you," she said. "I'm sorry, too, Dax. I know you meant well, and it must have seemed like we were all kind of conspiring against you. We need to communicate better, all of us."

I ate that crow, we flew back to Austin, and took all the girls white-water rafting in Colorado. This was my family, and I resolved that Campbell was going to be part of my family, too. I had a new daughter: a ferocious brown jungle-cat of a daughter, but we were family.

They were in Tarawa with us the night I proposed to Jacinta, three years later. I let them in on the plan and they "had something to do" while we went to dinner. When I dropped to one knee by the table before dessert, Jacinta's hand flew to her mouth and she burst into tears.

That threw my game off a little, but I barged ahead. She held out her hand and I slipped on the ring. She pulled me to my feet and threw herself into my arms, still crying like a baby.

"Umm... Peach, I was hoping this would make you happy," I told her, "not cause these tears of despair."

She made a watery little giggle into my shoulder. "I am happy," she said. "I cry when I'm extremely happy, too."

It was just a little curveball. I thought I hit it for grand slam.

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AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

How sentimentally nostalgic to spark up an old flame from a crash and burnt marraige to a hometown first love. Nice story with mutual exclusivity and non incest. What a fool believes to be real, the Wiseman has a problem, corrected by his loving girls. (Lucky?)

DeanofMeanDeanofMeanabout 2 months ago

Great bit of writing, I don't understand why Campbell got let off so easy, i am sure she Linda and Dee Dee would get along well in any part of February. Other than that picayune issue great story and could lead to so many others i kinda want to hear the exes pain because i am petty that way and you created some fun people here so anything to carry on the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Spectacular piece of writing. I thought it ended a bit too quickly for me but it didn’t hurt the story one bit, it’s just that I am more of a payoff person and love a good well constructed ending but I know others aren’t like that. I now have many stories to read by one of my new favorite authors so that’s a great bonus right there. Thanks for putting all your time and effort into making this story so wonderful with incredible characters that interacted so well.

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThree2 months ago

I liked it.

A bit too romantic for a guy reader, but not much.

The plot and the drama, however, were first class.

Very well done.

Top ratings from me.

IrishLaddy59IrishLaddy592 months ago

Outstanding story!

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