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Just as I fucked my mother over and again, I fucked my sister. Just as I fucked my sister over and again, I made love to my aunt, and fucked my cousin. Keeping it all in the family, we continued to have sex with one another as if we were roleplaying some convoluted form of Charles Dickens Great Expectations. Just as I continually played Pip, my mother, my sister, my aunt, and my cousin continually played the role of Miss Havisham forever trapped in Satis House. The one necessary ingredient to us having sex was that we must be in costume to have incestuous sex.
Please vote. This is a Halloween Contest story. Please give me the courtesy of your vote.
- COMMENTS
GeorgeGaleabout 2 years agoI loved the story, I found it so exciting and sexual. Now, again I loved the story, however, Michael was really way over thinking in this one. I love how he thought about having sex, but over and over and over, talk about one slow and thick headed SOB. I love the costume idea with Halloween, however, that just caused a lot of time (years) between each escapade, but it was a Halloween story.
Again, I loved the story and how well it was written and told.........():\
pooky12349over 6 years agoHello SusanJill,
First off, I loved the story and the plot, although most stories don't seem to lend themslves to such a thing. Nevertheless, it was good.
I know that there are different writing styles for everyone, so I can't get into what others might think or want. So, having said all that I felt that there were too many repititions in the story. With each woman the same things happened and the same language was used. Some repititions are fine, but too many of them drags the story down.
Now, I'm not saying that you need to change your writing style because this is just my thoughts on it. This is the first story of yours that I've read so I don't know if the style is similiar to your other works, but I aim to read them to find out! So keep writing and enjoy the stories as much as I enjoy reading them!
Ted
PS: Great picture coming out of the water!
rightbankover 6 years agoAbout making a comment about the story about halloween costumed roleplaying. So I opened the comment form so I could make a comment about halloween costumed roleplaying. Then with the form open instead of just thinking about it I wrote a comment about roleplaying while in a costume at Halloween.
I really liked the story and I wanted people to know I liked the story so I wrote a comment about how much I liked the story about halloween costumed roleplaying.
Then, not being assertive and forceful I acted on the decision to post a comment about halloween costumed roleplaying by hitting the button SUBMIT.
I liked the story about halloween costumed roleplaying
FASfanover 6 years agoVery well done, SusanJillParker -- this was a wonderful tale. It would be an injustice to give less than five stars to this piece of work!
I'm sure you won't need it, but good luck for the comp!
